That's not relevant, what is relevant is that he in fact did not kill her. And so his "tragic" story is less tragic, and also her story is less tragic cause she didn't die protecting Teach from his own dad. Itttttt made the characters into lemonade, who originally could have been perfectly nice...
It is, it’s considerably weakened character development because the character didn’t do anything horrible yet.
Showing WHY a character is sad > the character saying they’re sad. Obviously one makes you feel stronger empathy, you can guess which one hopefully.
Loved the chapter, didn’t like the fact that Rocks didn’t kill his woman in front of Teach. Then he would truly would have had a reason to cry and to beg for death, this way his crying falls flat, as well as Teach’s childhood so far.
Amazing, I loveeeee it. Incredibly fun chapters.
Rocks is going to end up being the MVP, especially if he actually kills his wife, which will do wonders for his tragic character :yearight:
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