Info Reviews & Experience

[Dragomir]

This thread serves to display the current levels of each role-player in the section. Additionally, it will serve as an area for Game Masters and reviewers to post their reviews of submitted battles. Please DO NOT submit your Battleground, Story Mission, and/or Canon Event as to avoid clogging the thread. Use the Battleground Submissions Thread as the place to submit any of those. An available reviewer will review your battle and post their review in here.

There are two types of EXP awarded.

Canon Exp: Story Missions, Islands, Naval Battles and Canon Events.

Non-canon Exp: Battlegrounds and Non-canon Events.

Canon Exp has a higher multiplier than Non-canon Exp and users will subsequently get more experience in here than they would doing a Battleground. Canon missions will also be prioritized over non-canon stories.

 

[Dream]

Level 1 - 400 EXP Total

Level 2 - 900 EXP Total

Level 3 - 1400 EXP Total

Level 4 - 2100 EXP Total

Level 5 - 2800 EXP Total

Level 6 - 3800 EXP Total

Level 7 - 5000 EXP Total

Level 8 - 6400 EXP Total

Level 9 - 8100 EXP Total

Level 10 - 9240 EXP Total

 

[Dream]

Level 11 - 10780 EXP Total
- Player

Level 12 - 13225 EXP Total
- Player

Level 13 - 16800 EXP Total
- Player

Level 14 - 20375 EXP Total
- Player

Level 15 - 24440 EXP Total
- Player

Level 16 - 28080 EXP Total
- Player

Level 17 - 31500 EXP Total
- Player

Level 18 - 34800 EXP Total
- Player

Level 19 - 38550 EXP Total
- Player

Level 20 - 41260 EXP Total
- Player

 

[Dream]

Level 21 - 44230 EXP Total
- Player

Level 22 - 45730 EXP Total
- Player

Level 23 - 46800 EXP Total
- Player

Level 24 - 49540 EXP Total
- Player

Level 25 - 51830 EXP Total
- Player

Level 26 - 53480 EXP Total
- Player

Level 27 - 55340 EXP Total
- Player

Level 28 - 56850 EXP Total
- Player

Level 29 - 60030 EXP Total
- Player

Level 30 - 62830 EXP Total
- @Go D. Usopp ™ = 62830 exp

 

[Dream]

Level 31 - 66170 EXP Total
- Player

Level 32 - 68480 EXP Total
- Player

Level 33 - 71060 EXP Total
- Player

Level 34 - 73280 EXP Total
- Player

Level 35 - 75640 EXP Total
- Player

Level 36 - 78120 EXP Total
- Player

Level 37 - 80000 EXP Total
- Player

Level 38 - 82130 EXP Total
- Player

Level 39 - 84020 EXP Total
- Player

Level 40 - 86300 EXP Total
- @Finalbeta = 86300 exp

 

[Dream]

Level 41 - 88840 EXP Total
- Player

Level 42 - 91900 EXP Total
- Player

Level 43 - 95110 EXP Total
- Player

Level 44 - 98210 EXP Total
- Player

Level 45 - 101460 EXP Total
- @Midnight Delight = 102,525 exp
- Player

Level 46 - 104740 EXP Total
- Player

Level 47 - 107890 EXP Total
- @Jiihad = 110,642 exp
- Player

Level 48 - 111190 EXP Total
- @Mr. Anderson = 111,829 exp
- Player

Level 49 - 114520 EXP Total
- Player

Level 50 - 117700 EXP Total
- @Dragomir = 117,700 exp
- @Noctis = 117,700 exp
- @Frayz = 117,700 exp
- Player

 

[Dream]

Level 51 - 121040 EXP Total
- Player

Level 52 - 124400 EXP Total
- Player

Level 53 - 127600 EXP Total
- Player

Level 54 - 130960 EXP Total
- Player

Level 55 - 134330 EXP Total
- @Dream = 134,673 exp
- @Owl Ki = 137,471 exp
- Player

Level 56 - 137540 EXP Total
- @Fleet Admiral Lee Hung = 138,430 exp
- Player

Level 57 - 140900 EXP Total
- Player

Level 58 - 144270 EXP Total
- Player

Level 59 - 147470 EXP Total
- Player

Level 60 - 152580 EXP Total
- @Beerbottle = 152,843 exp
- Player

 

[Dream]

Level 61 - 157120 EXP Total
- Player

Level 62 - 161890 EXP Total
- Player

Level 63 - 166730 EXP Total
- Player

Level 64 - 171470 EXP Total
- Player

Level 65 - 176450 EXP Total
- Player

Level 66 - 184520 EXP Total
- Player

Level 67 - 192840 EXP Total
- Player

Level 68 - 201220 EXP Total
- Player

Level 69 - 210030 EXP Total
- Player

Level 70 - 219090 EXP Total
- Player

 

[Dream]

Level 71 - 228200 EXP Total
- Player

Level 72 - 237770 EXP Total
- Player

Level 73 - 247600 EXP Total
- Player

Level 74 - 257470 EXP Total
- Player

Level 75 - 267840 EXP Total
- Player

Level 76 - 278480 EXP Total
- Player

Level 77 - 289150 EXP Total
- Player

Level 78 - 300340 EXP Total
- Player

Level 79 - 311810 EXP Total
- Player

Level 80 - 323580 EXP Total
- Player

 

[Dream]

Level 81 - 330950 EXP Total
- Player

Level 82 - 338670 EXP Total
- Player

Level 83 - 346490 EXP Total
- Player

Level 84 - 354110 EXP Total
- Player

Level 85 - 362100 EXP Total
- Player

Level 86 - 370180 EXP Total
- Player

Level 87 - 378050 EXP Total
- Player

Level 88 - 386310 EXP Total
- Player

Level 89 - 394650 EXP Total
- Player

Level 90 - 406940 EXP Total
- Player

 

[Dream]

Level 91 - 415510 EXP Total
- Player

Level 92 - 424160 EXP Total
- Player

Level 93 - 432590 EXP Total
- Player

Level 94 - 441410 EXP Total
- Player

Level 95 - 450330 EXP Total
- Player

Level 96 - 459330 EXP Total
- Player

Level 97 - 468420 EXP Total
- Player

Level 98 - 477610 EXP Total
- Player

Level 99 - 486550 EXP Total
- Player

Level 100 - 492540 EXP Total
- Player

 

[Dragomir]

Loguetown Review

Admiral Lee Hung -

Personality: 8
Story Progression: 9
Combat Prowess: 7
Descriptions: 9
Enjoyable: 8
Post Count: 11

EXP: 3585

Beerbottle -

Personality: 10
Story Progression: 6
Combat Prowess: 7
Descriptions: 10
Enjoyable: 9
Post Count: 11

EXP: 3694

Owl Ki -

Personality: 9
Story Progression: 6
Combat Prowess: 6
Descriptions: 8
Enjoyable: 9
Post Count: 11

EXP: 3262

Thoughts -

Spoiler

I enjoyed reading this introduction to the beginnings of this pirate crew. You guys did a fine job of showing to the reader who your characters were while also setting up for potential development not only for your individual characters but all three of you guys to progress as a crew. I like that because the meeting wasn't just like "hey, I just met you, and this is crazy, but here's my number, so join my pirate crew!" sort of deal. There was some internal conflict already presented in this introduction story that could play out to be a big deal later on. What I mean is basically how Kyria and Hakucha clash against one another. Kyria is someone who, from what I've read, is headstrong and confrontational while Hakucha is hesitant and much prefers to avoid any unnecessary battle with marines and the like. This could end up being something that causes a rift between the crew later down the road as Hakucha wants to stay out of fighting while Kyria is trying to get into fighting because of his bloodthirstiness and insanity getting the better hold of him.

And as for each individual character, as I said, development is being set up here. You have Hakucha who wants to become the Pirate King but would like to avoid fighting marines and well, that's just not gonna work out well on her journey. Then there's Kyria who is going through his own internal conflict of sanity vs insanity. I'm eager to see how all these things play through as the story progresses.

Now, of course, having dynamic characters is great, but static characters are also good in their own right. That's where Skoll and Malcolm come in. Lee, I'm not sure what your plans are for Skoll but I think for him it'd be best to simply flesh out his story instead of trying to create a major character arc where he goes through this crazy development and whatnot. You touched a bit on his backstory with that flashback and that piqued my interest for sure. Just my two cents on how I feel like you should direct his character. If you want him to be dynamic instead of static, that's perfectly fine.

Last but not least, Malcolm. I really like him. Firstly, I like that old English speaking you're giving him, Owl. Definitely adds some uniqueness to his character. He gives me an uncle Iroh vibe. An old, hardened warrior full of wisdom just trying to live his life. He's the simplest of all these characters but that's not a necessarily bad thing in my eyes.

Overall, job well-done guys. I'm liking what you got and I'm eager to see some more.

@Admiral Lee Hung @Owl Ki @Beerbottle

 

[Dream]

All levels have been updated including activity

Post automatically merged: Apr 9, 2021

80th Marine Branch Review:​

Jiihad @Jiihad
Personality: 8
Story Progression: 7
Combat Prowess: 7
Description: 8
Enjoyability: 8
Rule Breaks: 0
Post Count: 8
Experience: 2372 EXP

Mr.Anderson @Mr. Anderson
Personality: 6
Story Progression: 6
Combat Prowess: 7
Description: 6
Enjoyability: 7
Rule Breaks: 0
Post Count: 8
Experience: 1924 EXP

Dream @Dream
Personality: 7
Story Progression: 7
Combat Prowess: 7
Description: 6
Enjoyability: 7
Rule Breaks: 0
Post Count: 8
Experience: 1380 EXP

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All Levels will be updated

 

[Dream]

Open Sea that involved @Fleet Admiral Lee Hung @Beerbottle @Owl Ki

Fleet Admiral Lee Hung - @Fleet Admiral Lee Hung
Personality: 10
Story Progression: 9
Combat Prowess: 10
Descriptions: 10
Enjoyable: 10
Post Count: 16
Experience: 6,531

Beerbottle - @Beerbottle
Personality: 10
Story Progression: 9
Combat Prowess: 9
Descriptions: 10
Enjoyable: 10
Post Count: 16
Experience: 6,361

Owl Ki - @Owl Ki
Personality: 10
Story Progression: 9
Combat Prowess: 0
Descriptions: 10
Enjoyable: 10
Post Count: 15
Experience: 4,593

Will add the exp to your already cumulative exp that you have already, once i'm done with the next review too.

 

[Fleet Admiral Lee Hung]

Filler, so we get tags next time

 

[Dream]

Open Sea adventure that included @Jiihad & @Mr. Anderson

Jiihad - @Jiihad
Personality: 9
Story Progression: 8
Combat Prowess: 6
Descriptions: 9
Enjoyable: 9
Post Count: 7
Experience: 2,281

Mr.Anderson - @Mr. Anderson
Personality: 8
Story Progression: 8
Combat Prowess: 8
Descriptions: 8
Enjoyable: 9
Post Count: 7
Experience: 2,281

Just some quick thoughts;

Jiihad; you didn't scale off your DPR if you did so you would get a higher mark in combat prowess.

Spoiler

Hyakumaigawara Seiken: A very strong hard punch that can break through 100 tiles and send the user's opponent flying.
(21 Mastery, 21 Strength) Destructive Potency Rank: C

As there's a requirement that revolves around your Strength. If you see the technique it requires 21 in your "Strength". With you having 61 in your Strength in your current stats, so it means you can use this technique. Same for your Fishman Karate, however the technique will scale off your "Strength" stat.

(If you take a look at the Stats in Combat to the Guide to Stat Points)

Your Base 61 Strength Stat for "Attack Potency" = 61-80: 4. Small Building Level

Then if you scroll down a little you will see this:

Next will be the explanation of how your character can perform attacks of multiple tiers that are above the current stat cap. As every ability will have a rank set to how much damage it can do and deal. So each rank will give an extra amount to certain destruction levels as your character progresses.

D:+0(this is unnamed punches, sword slashes, etc)
C:+1 Bracket (+20)
B:+2 Brackets (+40)
A:+3 Brackets (+60)
S:+4 Brackets (+80)
S+:+5 Brackets (+100)
etc.

As your technique used is a "Rank C" so your attack will go up by "+1 Bracket (+20)" so your "Attack Potency" will rise a rank to = 81-99: 5. Large Building Level

Hope that makes sense, if your stuck you can always ask.

Give me up to 10 minutes after this post to update all of your "EXP"
@Jiihad @Mr. Anderson @Fleet Admiral Lee Hung @Beerbottle @Owl Ki

Also Lee give me a filler post thanks :)

 

[Fleet Admiral Lee Hung]

Filler

 

[Dragomir]

A more in-depth review of the 80th Branch Base. As requested-​

Jiihad, you are very proficient in story description. You use fluent words and hone in on describing the scenery around your character. The characterization of Rihan has a profound sense of humor in it which definitely helps keeps the action bits entertaining. Your natural humor flows well into it. That being said though, I do wish to see some more branches of his personality as you dive deeper into the story of the Nex Pirates. Avoid having him just be a one-dimensional funny character, almost serving as comic relief. Some other points you could have hit to improve your RPing was when you had mentioned not wanting to get recaptured:

So my hunch was right, tha head huncho letting tha runts get tha first crack. Which means—“Yo Katsumi. We in crunch time blood.” Tha threat of impeding recapture now setting in, Rihan grips his staff harder and stand to his full height

“Don’t know what kind formation this shit is, but guess tha rumour mill was true. Tha 80th specializes in guns and marksmanship. But I ain’t going back to jail. Y’all wanna throw bullets fine I got sum for y’all ass.”

Instead of simply saying that you don't want to go to jail, you could have shown it through his emotions or how felt of the situation. Like this:

So my hunch was right, tha head huncho letting tha runts get tha first crack. Which means—“Yo Katsumi. We in crunch time blood.” Tha threat of impeding recapture now setting in, Rihan grips his staff harder and stand to his full height. Oh no no no, this ain't happening again. Not today! Rihan spat on the ground and scowled at the marines. His eyes flared in frustration but more importantly, fear. That was one of the worst days of my life. The way those wretched marines mauled us, starved us and destroyed us on the way to Impel Down. And then the pain came even in worse packages when we arrived at Impel Down. A cold shudder ran through Rihan's body as the memories of his imprisonment flooded his mind. There is no way in hell, I'm returning there!

I am kinda making it sound as if you have PTSD here but I hope you get what I'm shooting for with it. Dive a little deeper into the emotions and feelings of your character. It helps greatly to flesh them out to the reader.

Mr. Anderson, I have similar points to hit about Katsumi as well.

Adrenaline was now coursing through Katsumi's veins. And the grin from earlier returned, this is what he missed out on during the battle against Grondilier, the thrill of battle.

Likewise with Jiihad, you could have given Katsumi a bit more characterization in this. It's nice to know that he likes the thrill of battle, but the way you did it was rather surface level. Some dialogue could be used with Katsumi reminiscing on how boring the war of the two kingdoms was or how much fun he hopes to gain in fighting these marines. And what about the description of his emotion? A grin helps but it doesn't do a lot.

Adrenaline was now coursing through Katsumi's veins. *Badump...badump...badump, badump, badump, badumpbadumpbadump* The beat of his heart slow at first, but steadily grew to a vigorous pump, beating the blood into his body at rapid-fire. Katsumi's eyes bulged, growing redder by the minute as the blood vessels in them began to fill. Katsumi clenched his fists and grinned a smile that would make a dentist proud. "Ah, yes, this was what was missing in the dull battle between those two kingdoms. For every fight, there should be some thrill, some desire for blood, or else, what's the point? It's time to dance and I'm ready to take someone out to the ballroom!

Another thing to touch upon for your Anderson is that you need to some more show and not tell.

Katsumi kept his gaze trained on the island up ahead. While he was happy he got the reward, he was also pissed he didnt get the oppurtunity to face any of enemy commanders directly. So he was itching to blow off some steam.

For example, here you should have done more to show the reader how Katsumi is pissed at not fighting. Either with some dialogue by having him say it, disgruntled grumbling also works, a description of his facial expressions, etc. Stuff like this helps create a better description and give more personality to your character. Right now, I would say that an issue for Katsumi is that he doesn't have any cutting-edge personality that gives him his own persona. He feels bland and passive at times. Though, he is quick-thinking and creative. Using smoke and flash bombs to distract the much stronger enemy was a good idea. Otherwise, there isn't much going for him at this instance.

I very much enjoyed reading the banter between Rihan and Katsumi. It's some genuinely funny stuff and it keeps the story very entertaining to read. Don't change that.

@Jiihad @Mr. Anderson

 

[Dream]

Reviewing the BG that took place between @Jiihad and @Beerbottle

Jiihad - @Jiihad
Personality: 8
Story Progression: 8
Combat Prowess: 7
Descriptions: 9
Enjoyable: 9
Post Count: 12
Experience: 2,606

Beerbottle - @Beerbottle
Personality: 8
Story Progression: 8
Combat Prowess: 8
Descriptions: 8
Enjoyable: 9
Post Count: 11
Experience: 2,389

Some nitpicking by me, i mean thoughts. This only contains DPR side of your BG.

Spoiler

“Hmm! That’s definitely not normal, someone with that strong of an aura. Let alone in this tree huggin ahh place. I doubt they’re from hea. But still, seems he’s only a couple feet down tha street and heading this way”

As I entered the tavern the room hushed, everything grew tense. I activated my observation Haki and easily covered the room and area outside. Only one man had the power to challenge me in here. From what I could see there were also a group of police in here, but they were all weak..

I know you mentioned the use of CoO (Awareness), but just make sure you add this part when using your CoO

Awareness Observation
Requirements: Observation Haki Mastery of 41 or above.
Description: The user will be able to sense living things within a 100-meter radius of them.

This can be found here in Haki.

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Seeing that tha distance between us was to small to mount a full counterattack. I coat both of my hands with Armament Haki. Tha technique giving them a reflective sheen, even tho they were black in color. Hastily putting my hands in front of my chest and leaning into tha wind blade. His blade of wind clashing with my hakified palms. Tha blade eventually dissipating, opening and closing my hands I could feel tha sting on my palms and a slight trail of blood making it down my left palm

You only missed out the scaling portion of this and the DPR

Defensively, Armament Haki can be used as follows:

Basic Hardening (Kouka)
1-99 Mastery: Defensive Augmentation: 1 Durability Bracket (+20 Durability)

As your Durability stat used in the BG is: 78 = 1-80: 4. City Block Level
+1 Durability Bracket for using Hardening to defend yourself = 81-99: 5. Town Level
Result being = If the player's resilience is above the opponent's DPR, In brackets by two or more. Their character will not receive any injury's (As you have +2 more higher Dura > Beer's attack here, found here in Guide to Stat points.)

Level's have been updated

 

[Dragomir]

Filler.