Questions & Mysteries Create a character and give them a mini story

#1
A vice admiral/ admiral with a broken sword with black patches on it. fought mihawk and while he was about to create a black blade in the process his blade was shattered by mihawk with it his sword fighting spirit.

An opponent for zoro. Fights using a fencing sword (thought to be a dual sword man) but when he is about to lose, he unsheaths a meliodas like sword with a black tip.
 

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#2
A Paradise pirate who ate the Ape Ape Fruit, Model; Gorilla. Bounty of 177,000,000 berries.

He primarily defeats and grows his crew by hypnotizing promising recruits via his jazz music, pirate or navy. He dreams of owning his own pirate Armada and sweeping into the New World. He has his sights set on promising rookies like Luffy.

Post-Thriller Bark but Pre-Sabaody, he is a prisoner being exchanged between Hina & Smoker, though he manages to hypnotize Hina’s officers and makes an escape—shooting and injuring Smoker with a seastone bullet. Smoker & Tashigi escape into the ocean and towards a nearby island.

The Straw Hats find the injured Tashigi & Smoker—only for the Funky Monkey to catch wind of a 300 mil. Rookie on the same island. He finds them & manages to hypnotize all the Straw Hats barring an injured Zoro,Smoker, Tashigi, Luffy (conquerors tax) & Brook. He likewise has taken control of Smoker’s crew alongside Commodore Hina and her own.

After making the pirates (and marines) fight each other, Brook severs his control over the others with his own music.

This funky monkey is defeated by Smoker & Luffy then taken to Impel Down by Smoker.
 
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#6
An Ancient Sea King from from far before the Void Century who ate the Hito Hito No Mi and became a sentient tyrant overlord.


He fought and subjugated all races, and was eventually destroyed by a prototype version of the Ancient Weapons.

It took the armies of all the world, using haki and graded blades which had been developed for the first time in history, to distract him until the weapon could be used.

The war in question resulted in the decimation of 90% of the world's races and a huge part of its landmass, with the survivors eventually shaping the OP world we know today.

(Sorry if this is a bit large scale/ridiculous, I just love ancient horror kaiju types)
 
#8
An Ancient Sea King from from far before the Void Century who ate the Hito Hito No Mi and became a sentient tyrant overlord.


He fought and subjugated all races, and was eventually destroyed by a prototype version of the Ancient Weapons.

It took the armies of all the world, using haki and graded blades which had been developed for the first time in history, to distract him until the weapon could be used.

The war in question resulted in the decimation of 90% of the world's races and a huge part of its landmass, with the survivors eventually shaping the OP world we know today.

(Sorry if this is a bit large scale/ridiculous, I just love ancient horror kaiju types)
why the hito hito no mi
 
#9
why the hito hito no mi
Well I was thinking he could be an evil genius, like Chopper but absolutely monstrous and with say Xebec's aggressive mindset.

So he could basically create his own rumble ball equivalent (maybe something more powerful and horrifying that involves sacrifices for e.g), understand other races powers and strats to defeat and control them, basically carve his own empire to worship him.

But really he could use any DF as long as it makes him an intelligent and powerful threat. I was thinking Yami, Magu, Hie, Goro or Gura could work as well.
 
#10
Well I was thinking he could be an evil genius, like Chopper but absolutely monstrous and with say Xebec's aggressive mindset.

So he could basically create his own rumble ball equivalent (maybe something more powerful and horrifying that involves sacrifices for e.g), understand other races powers and strats to defeat and control them, basically carve his own empire to worship him.

But really he could use any DF as long as it makes him an intelligent and powerful threat. I was thinking Yami, Magu, Hie, Goro or Gura could work as well.
oh when I searched hito, sengokus picture popped up. i forgot hito means human
 
#12
A bounty hunter (perhaps a former Marine) struggles to reach the top.

He starts from the weakest seas and reaches the New World, where he manages to capture one of the Emperors.
We'd see how he got the money from the WG, the obstacles they would put in his way so that he wouldn't upset the balance of the 3 powers etc.
 
#14
Some Evil ruler who sends a guy to the shc with the task to lie to the shc how he heard about the good things the strawhats did and they Need to Come and help his Kingdom too etc. but actually it is a trap
 
#15
A young, up and coming Marine Vice Admiral. He joined the Marines out of necessity - it was the only place that offered him both a meal and safety.
His mentors discovered that he had a knack for strategizing (both on a larger scale and in 1 v 1 situations) but motivating him is almost impossible. Despite his lack of motivation he has risen to the rank of Vice Admiral within 2 years (coinciding with Luffy's journey).
However, one day after reading the newest World Economic Journal his face darkened. He didn't say anything other than "now I have to become Admiral by the end of the year, or this bastard will walk away scot free". From that day on he has made it his mission to go after a certain pirate crew and annihilate them, starting with their newest member.

He ate the Bone Bone paramecia fruit. It allows him to manipulate every bone in his body. Even when not using the fruit, his bones are stronger than the average human's. He can regenerate and produce additional bones for as long as he has nutrients in his body.
One of his signature moves is the Skeletarmour - a full body bone armour that leaves virtually no gaps. It's the Grand Line's Ultimate Defense!
 
#16
Too long and not grammatically perfect so you've been warned.
An admiraL by the name of Raiki.

He has the liquid liquid fruit and can turn his body and other objects he touches to change form into a liquid. His favorite move is to turn his sword into a liquid to expand its size for long range and unexpected attacks, also his sword is basically unlockable by any swordsman since he will change it into a water like substance on contact with your blade, you can cut it in half but it will reassembles once it's past your sword and cuts your chest.


He used to be a criminal and was raised in a pirate family until he met his wife and decided to change his ways and pay for his crimes. He defeated his father when he was trying to destroy his wife's country and gave him to the navy. He then was pardoned by the WG and because of his monstrous strength he was recruited by Sengoku and rose up the ranks very quickly.


His younger psycho brother (Remy) decided to pay him back for his betrayal so he killed his wife and took his 6 year old son hostage. He burned the son's face in a den den mushi conversation with him and promised to finish the job if their father isn't released in 2 days. Sengoku doesn't allow him to release his dad but helps set up a trap at the hostage exchange meetup but Remy escapes thanks to his new secret fruit: the Bomb Bomb fruit.
Raiki takes his son back and as he goes to hug him the bomb that was put on him with the fruit, explodes, kills his son and blinds him as well.


12 years has passed. Raiki has given up on trying to capture his brother since the time that he took over the island of Tawaii. This island was the most important prison after imple down and was used to house some of the worst criminals. 4 years ago Remy and his crew stormed the place, killed the guards, recruited the criminals and now use this island as their base.
if he was in new world he would be a 5th emperor but since he is in paradise he has become The king of that sea and any pirate in that place either joins him or gets crushed. His crew and manpower is believed to have surpassed that of a yonko even and he has a whopping 2.8 billion bounty on his head.

Raiki has never taken his attention off this place and is waiting for the best moment to strike until he overhears Sengoku and Garp talking about how they should break the news to him that Remy will be given the rank of a warlord in a week and all his crimes and even his crewmates will be forgiven.

He leaves the HQ in a rush, recruites as many VA's and soldiers as he can and moves for the island. Sengoku calls to stop him but he's reminded that he has no right since the criminal isn't a warlord officially yet. Raiki hangs up as Sengoku is sweating and shouting while Garp is eating cookies.
The island is surrounded and Raiki calls for a bustercall but the enemy is too numerous and strong. Will he succeed? He doesn't care. One of the brothers has to die today.
 
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#17
My characters name is Tai Long, he has the poop poop fruit and his goal is eliminating the straw hats. The straw hats underestimate him but he is secretly strong so he wipes out all of them except for Zoro who he spares bc he never showers

That's his code, he spares everyone who stinks just like him
 
#18
It's not that detailed but here is a clunky rough draft of a mini-story:

Hai-Zo (Tai-Yu) was a man born in the land of Qin. Much like Wano, Qin was an ancient country with centuries of culture and tradition, but it was unaffiliated with the WG; it wasn't an ally. The reason being was not only the strength of it's people but also what guarded it. An ancient sea beast that lived near it's shores for centuries, named Yushe (Jade Serpent), guarding the land and it's people for one reason, the emerald pearl. It was a gigantic pearl, nestled deep within the land, radiating an enchanting energy which drew the beast to it, like crows to a pearl. The Qin folk had worshiped the Emerald since time immemorial, believing that it was the source of their health, strength, longevity and fertile land. Not only was the Yushe instinctually tied to the pearl but so were the people of Qin; born with a distinct scent granted to them by the pearl, they were exempt from the wrath of the beast; rather, they were protected by it as it saw them as offspring of the jewel it lived to guard. Hai-zo was a marine, with the discipline and strength of a Qin in his blood, alongside a powerful rock logia devil fruit, he rose up the ranks making his way to Fleet Admiral. The newly appointed FA was loved and respected by the people. He believed in "immutable justice" solid and unchanging, he didn't discriminate, if there was someone who needed saving, he would save them, such a day would soon come.

On the front lines of the new generation there was a rising star, fool-hardy and hot headed, the 29 year old Drummond D. Baron was ravaging through the new world. Not only was he a member of the infamous D clan but he also possessed a powerful awakened devil fruit, the Sabi-Sabi (rust fruit). This young pirate had amassed a fleet of 8 thousand strong and a bounty of 2.1 billion. But his newest exploit would put an end to his terror, as he set his eyes on the Emerald pearl. With his fleet he sailed to Qin, but the pirates would never step foot on it's soil, for the Yushe ravaged them and swallowed them whole. It seemed like the threat was eliminated, but the curse of the D's reaches beyond the grave. Among the devoured cargo on Baron's ship there was a Devil fruit, it held the power of the mythical Taotie. The Yushe had been cursed by the sea, for now it had turned into a raging, gluttonous beast. No longer is it a guardian, but a calamity upon the land and it's people. It pounced, bit, mauled, ripped, shredded and devoured; the men, women and children of Qin, each of them a warrior in their own right, were incapable of drawing a drop of blood from the monster. The once harmonious land had turned into a symphony from hell, with no savior.

Back at the Navy HQ, the newly appointed Fleet Admiral is seated at his desk hidden behind piles of paperwork. As if a sign from the divine, a chill ran down his spine, the same feeling a distant mother has when her child is in danger. Acting upon this instinct he opens his desk drawer to see two burning vivre cards, his mothers and younger brothers. He rushes to the communication center, but a young marine stops him mid-way, he informs Hai-zo that they intercepted reports from pirates who fled Qin's shores about what transpired. Hai-Zo frantically calls the Commander-in-chief, Daiken, requesting permission to intervene, but he reminds Hai that Qin is not an affiliate of the WG and that they are under no obligation to protect it, the losses would also be too great. But this doesn't deter him, his sense of justice wouldn't allow him to abandon anyone, let alone his own people. Hai-zo takes a ship and heads to Qin, the journey would take him a full day of continuous sailing on the fastest of vessels. As Hai-zo draws closer to Qin he already sees a preview of it's state, the proud mountains that once stood as pillars have been flattened, smoke blackened the sky above and haunting screams could be heard from afar. Once he reaches Qin he dashes with lightning speed easily covering the distance between himself and the beast. He strikes it with a earth shaking attack before it could bite through another town. What followed was a battle of epic magnitude, but Hai-zo was fighting alone and this threat was too much for him to deal with while innocents were present. Using a great deal of his remaining power he creates a massive Ark for the surviving Qinfolk to board and escape.

Now only he and the beast remain, with no hope for reinforcements he continues to fight with all the strength he has left. Days upon days he battles, but the beasts fury never waned. Hai-zo's body was beaten and broken, kept alive by his sense of duty, he knew there was only one way to victory. Using his awakened logia powers he starts to reshape the entire country; mountains, rivers and valleys all bending to his will, molding it into a prison for the beast. To stop it from eating it's way out, he takes the sacred Emerald and forces it into the beasts maw; silencing it's bite forever he can now trap it in the Qin prison. Hai-zo begins to mold the country around the Yushe, trapping it and himself. Qin groaned in protest, cracks split the land and gave way, weakening it until it sank slowly into the sea.

When news reached the WG, they wasted no time to cover it up, re-writing history to tarnish the name of Hai-zo. They started spreading lies about how he attempted to use his position of power to take the Emerald for himself, conqueror Qin by force and ultimately met his demise against the Yushe. The world moved on but the truth remained in the hearts of the Qinfolk. Adrift and grieving, they eventually landed on foreign shores. But they were a persevering people, from the stones of the Ark they rebuilt their civilization, a place born from the soul of its savior. They called it Bei Sheng, the land of sorrowful rebirth.
 
#19
Character name - Kairos

A character from first world who is immortal thanks to law's fruit operation done to him. He has eye eye fruit capable of seeing all ongoing events in one piece world and is also capable of seeing the futute.

He is eating popcorn and watching all events happening in OP world and waiting for the dawn of one piece to happen

:kobeha:
 
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