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Also Oda’s moving surprisingly fast with this flashback

Harald met his first lover -> had Hajrudin -> changed his ways to become a good king -> met his first lawful wife -> had Loki

Alll in one chapter

I’m rocking with Elbaf’s pacing so far
I would've been totally fine with more than one chapter about Harald and his change. The motivations behind it felt a bit too simple. Still, I trust this chapter will deliver, it doesn’t seem bad at all.
 
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I would've been totally fine with more than one chapter about Harald and his change. The motivations behind it felt a bit too simple. Still, I trust this chapter will deliver, it doesn’t seem bad at all.
I like it.
Harald was probably never treated like this as such he respected Ida because she didn’t fear him for his size or strength.

I think it’s a cute little story
 
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Feels bit weird to just kinda gloss from one wife to the next. Like I feel like there should be a clearer distinguishing point unless Ida is just still around doing nothing.
 
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