General & Others Oda’s fight choreography in 1164 is atrocious

#1
Honestly, the whole choreography of how that played out was absurdly sloppy.

Kaido's still a massive dragon, but once he gets slapped into a cliffside, we get no visual exposition of where his body is.

Big Mom gets kneed into a completely indeterminant cliffside, and once again, we're given no visual exposition of where she actually ended up.

Whitebeard gets attacked in such a way that that peak is blasted through at its base, causing it to topple, but we still get no visual exposition of whether it was his body that got launched or Xebec's attack just continues on past him and he falls over, or what.

Then, worst of all, Xebec does a whole runaround of a large part of the island to get Eris and Teach before getting lured back by Roger and Garp's CoC burst, telling us that they just stayed in the same spot that whole time and had no reaction to anything Rocks did beforehand? Or Imu's presence?

I mean, all six of them were literally standing (Kaido flying, obviously) in essentially the same spot, but we don't see those two even once during Xebec's initial rampage or have any explanation for why they sat on their hands while he ran off.

And ultimately, it just makes the visualization of the space and positioning of these characters incredibly difficult to properly comprehend.
 

RayanOO

Lazy is the way
#2
Cannot agree more

that chapter paneling, action and whole scenario was garbage and lazy as fuck

Ode had the general idea : Rocks turning into a demon, beating his crewmates, attacking Eris / Teach and then fighting Roger / Garp in the end

but he couldn’t care less about the details and how to give real life and meat to that general idea

Even Shiki vs Ganzui was lazy as fuck, we barely understand / see Ganzui state

Overall GV has been that since its beginning : okay ideas but fucking execution
 
#3
Then, worst of all, Xebec does a whole runaround of a large part of the island to get Eris and Teach before getting lured back by Roger and Garp's CoC burst, telling us that they just stayed in the same spot that whole time and had no reaction to anything Rocks did beforehand? Or Imu's presence?
Funniest shit from the chapter:milaugh:
Both of them just stood there doing nothing for a considerable amount of time.

It's clear oda likes his group fights but doesn't have enough ability to draw them anymore
 

RayanOO

Lazy is the way
#7
That'd be because those aren't actually fights, they are just single attacks where the attacker immediately moves on. It is just more Clash Piece which has dominated in the post-timeskip.
I would have been okay with little clash and single attacks

But here in this chapter you barely understand what the attacks are, they are really poorly drawn, no hype, no good effect, nothing

and yeah Oda made Roger/Garp sitting duck during the whole ordeal
 
#8
Then, worst of all, Xebec does a whole runaround of a large part of the island to get Eris and Teach before getting lured back by Roger and Garp's CoC burst, telling us that they just stayed in the same spot that whole time and had no reaction to anything Rocks did beforehand? Or Imu's presence?
I had this exact same reaction lmfao.

Whitebeard and Rocks had a clash that split the island.
After that, he just............LEFT?

What happened to Whitebeard? Even if he did get blown away (nothing credibly suggests this), what were Roger and Garp doing? Just.......standing, when Rocks ran off to the other side of the island???
KEK.

Goda tier writing.

:steef::pepeclown:
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oda's fight choreography has always been mid
Not this bad lol.
 
#9
I would have been okay with little clash and single attacks

But here in this chapter you barely understand what the attacks are, they are really poorly drawn, no hype, no good effect, nothing

and yeah Oda made Roger/Garp sitting duck during the whole ordeal
The attacks look fine to me.

Why would Roger/Garp get involved when Xebec is attacking Kaido, Big Mom and Whitebeard? Why would they care about that? Only when Xebec goes on a rampage killing everyone on the island and threatening Roger's crew and the Marines do Roger and Garp confront him.
 
#16
"Why did they take three seconds to confront him after his rampage instead of 0.01 seconds!!"

The absolute state of the One Piss fandom, so desperate to find or even fabricate any flaw that they can, shameful.
Bro are you fucking retarded or something?
It was considerable amount of time. The fact that xebec went from the center of the island to the coast and back should tell you that. And for all of that time Oda made Garp and Roger just stand there looking around.
 
#17
Bro are you fucking retarded or something?
It was considerable amount of time. The fact that xebec went from the center of the island to the coast and back should tell you that. And for all of that time Oda made Garp and Roger just stand there looking around.
The considerable amount of time of a whole two pages:MonkeWhat:


It isn't my job to educate you bro, just go back to school and better yourself.
 
#18
I think whole point Rocks being bad guy but at some point Oda sort of changed his mind , he decided to bring in Imu in God Valley .

Its just clusterfuck at this point . I highly recommend you should stop caring Oda gave up on logics long ago he decided to go full Naruto mode . I had the same co.plain back when I was reading Naruto but experience taught me just give up on logics and enjoy reading .
 
#20
The considerable amount of time of a whole two pages:MonkeWhat:


It isn't my job to educate you bro, just go back to school and better yourself.
Yeah you're definitely retarded as well as blind.
Xebec immediately left from that spot after dealing with WB. The falling mountain could've crushed roger and garp's ship but still they remained standing still.
It was more than 2 pages. But you're a oda slurper so I'll just let this go instead of wasting my time here
 
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