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Jew D. Boy
Hey DDM, I’m writing myself a reminder to check it out when I have a bit of time tomorrow...I’m a little too stoned right now to give your work the kind of clearheaded analysis it deserves 🥴👹
Den_Den_Mushi
Haha no worries, glad to hear you’re having a good time man.
Jew D. Boy
All right, I’ve apparently only read the first four chapters, so I just read number 5 and I’m racking my brain wondering if Briar’s long-lost father is someone we already know or another one of your (excellently written) OCs...
Jew D. Boy
Still in the middle of Kikyo’s story, but I really like how you make Hancock and Mihawk feel more substantial than in the canon; the former is not the fawning pixie girl she is for Luffy, and the latter isn’t the unflappable loner he is in general. Wish Oda would take some notes from you 😏
Den_Den_Mushi
Briar’s dad will be an OC! I’m glad to hear you’ve been enjoying my OCs so far, it’s always fun to write characters that aren’t restrained by canon 😀 Kikyo is one of the few canon imports but I tried to give her more depth and some justification as to why she never liked Luffy