General & Others Akainu Vs Aokiji Fan Chapter

#5
I stopped reading when it said boa beat coby.
you're expecting Coby to beat her ?

i used to think he wouldn't beat her , but seeing Nami and Usopp are seemingly going to defeat Ulti and Page One , and Brook Franky Robin will probably defeat Who's Who Sasaki Black Maria , i think it's possible for Coby to beat her

albeit the fact that they both have good relationships with Luffy could be a hindrance
 

HA001

World's Strongest Swordsman
#6
you're expecting Coby to beat her ?

i used to think he wouldn't beat her , but seeing Nami and Usopp are seemingly going to defeat Ulti and Page One , and Brook Franky Robin will probably defeat Who's Who Sasaki Black Maria , i think it's possible for Coby to beat her

albeit the fact that they both have good relationships with Luffy could be a hindrance
Oda pretty much told us she losing.
 
#7
Oda pretty much told us she losing.
yea in an event ( interview ? ) some time ago Oda acted like her , Vivi , and Sabo were in bad situations iirc

plus , Coby is aiming to be an Admiral , probably will be the strongest Marine ever even . and will have a sparring with Luffy in the epilogue

first major accomplishment Oda gave him is being the Hero of the Rocky Port incident , in which Law was involved .

second major accomplishment , defeating Hancock ? will be quite good for him .

plus i think he could be an opponent to Brook or Usopp , or the Tenth Strawhat in the Final War , post defeating Blackbeard Pirates who will be stronger than a standard Emperor crew like Beasts Pirates .

these are my headcanons , but i think the matchups between SHs and Marines are going to be like this :

• Luffy vs Akainu ( Sabo is also possible , but anyway , continue to other matchups )
• Zoro vs Kizaru
• Sanji + Jinbe vs Ryokugyu

• Franky vs Chaton
• Robin vs Momousagi
• Nami vs Tsuru
• Chopper vs John Giant​

Tenth Strawhat ( ? ) , Brook , Usopp vs who ? i couldn't figure this out , but the strongest candidates are X-Drake , Coby , Smoker​
 
#15
was that a disclaimer for your post?

if you have not noticed. my post does not take a stance. I only outlined what is happening here.
you, and the rest who can never do better than what OP posted - storywise or other - are complaining about it.

criticism is one thing.
ik ik, its the internet, but I highly doubt that you would go into the kitchen and tell the cook that the food was "hot garbage" or "the dumbest food you have ever tasted".

not enjoying something does not give you the right to be a complete prick. especially if you have no idea what you are even talking about and could not give a constructive opinion whatsoever on how this work could be improved.
 
#16
you, and the rest who can never do better than what OP posted - storywise or other - are complaining about it.
i prolly cant do better than OP but how did u know others cant too? i mean it wasnt some quality fanfiction or anything at all.
1st part was basically what Camp "Boa beats Coby" and the camp "Coby beats Boa" claims all the time. OP didnt exactly invented wheel in that part. then we get SSG. i mean pretty much everyone in the fanbase is saying they will be tested, majority thinks it will be tested on warlords. so again doesnt seem too much complicated stuffs.
then the Aokiji Vs Akainu: this is basically a watered down version of Luffy Vs Kata. Due to awakening Kiji is basically superior to akainu. and he outplays him every turn(just like kata did against Luffy). But no matter Aokiji couldnt down Akainu for good as he keep coming back up(just like Luffy did no matter how much kata tried). after a long ass fight(10 days) Akainu awakens(just like luffy awakens FS). And the final clash also ended somewhat similar way Luffy Vs Kata did.
the similarities are too much to ignore between these 2 fight.

so i dont see why ppl beside me who are complaining can never do better.
not enjoying something does not give you the right to be a complete prick. especially if you have no idea what you are even talking about and could not give a constructive opinion whatsoever on how this work could be improved.
ik ik, its the internet, but I highly doubt that you would go into the kitchen and tell the cook that the food was "hot garbage" or "the dumbest food you have ever tasted".
i mean its not uncommon to tell cook that food is hot garbage if the food truly tasted bad in a restaurants. i mean if the cook is my mom then while i wont go calling it "the dumbest food i have eat" but i will surely tell her that food was bad.

not enjoying something does not give you the right to be a complete prick. especially if you have no idea what you are even talking about and could not give a constructive opinion whatsoever on how this work could be improved.
i dont think i was being a prick. sorry if it came off that way. if i was trying to be a prick then i would comment along the line of "this sucks. stop drawing/writing". i am alright with this art style.
maybe if u got off ur high horse u would have noticed, while i didnt go into details, i did say b4hand:
Its always better to be impartial while writing stuffs imo. and the fight felt too monotonic, it seems Aokiji is the one taking lead every time tho their personality will suggest otherwise.
so i did mention some of my reasons why thought it was bad.
considering my original post was only 2 lines, so it should be kinda impossible to know that i am fkn clueless on this subject. so this bolded part doesnt make any sense, unless u r in my head(if u r in my head, i request please get out. Ghosts are scary:josad:):
not enjoying something does not give you the right to be a complete prick. especially if you have no idea what you are even talking about and could not give a constructive opinion whatsoever on how this work could be improved.
 
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Finalbeta

Ging Freecss stan
#17
Boa beating Coby isn't something so scandalous, not enough to say that the chapter is not good. We know nothing of Coby's progresses yet and it's still somehow in the air how powerful Boa truly is. So as of now I see no problems with it.
 
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