General & Others How would you have written the Wano matchups?

#1
The matchups so far have been mostly what I predicted, but there are a few adjustments I’d make.

1. Jinbe doesn’t fight Who’s Who. Instead, Brook fights Who’s Who. Fellow mid trio members, Franky and Robin, got to solo a F5, so it’s only fair that Brook gets to do so too. And for all you powerscaling freaks who insist that Brook absolutely cannot beat the strongest Vet, then I would just have the story rewritten so that WsW still gets portrayed as on the same level as Sasaki and Maria, but not necessarily the strongest of the three

2. Jinbe fights Smoothie. This matchup would make sense since Jinbe is clearly on YC level, after his performance against WsW, so he can tango with Smoothie. Both also use water to power up their attacks, and Jinbe has a stronger connection to the BMPs than the BPs. Also, Smoothie getting an actual fight would be much cooler than her doing literally nothing.

3. Chopper fights P1. I’d much rather have seen Chopper get an actual matchup instead of his shining moment in this arc being curing a virus that no readers were actually interested in, and then having an entirely off screen fight against Beast Form Queen, who was just fucking around. It would also be nice to see P1 actually do something in Onigashima instead of being Ulti’s useless sidekick

4. Nami vs Ulti actually becomes a decently written fight. Nami uses the Zeus attack she used against BM back at WCI to finish off Ulti. That attack was so much cooler and actually did a good job at portraying how damaging it is, as opposed to the awful Ulti-finishing attack used in the manga, which has no weight behind it at all

5. Usopp beats Jack. Yes, I said it. Usopp beats Jack. Of course, in this scenario, Jack still goes through his beating on the roof, and then proceeds to get weakened even further by fighting (and eventually beating) Inu. So Usopp would be beating a Jack who isn’t close to full strength. Usopp would first start off the fight by fighting at a long range, fighting smart, and laying traps in order to slowly wear down Jack over time while also keeping Jack away from him. However, Jack would ultimately end up catching up to Usopp, and in that moment, Usopp would be forced to evolve as a character, and instead of fighting cowardly, he will fight bravely and take on (a severely weakened) Jack head on. In this scenario, I would have Usopp unlocking CoA at the very least, but I would also have Usopp probably get another powerup on top of that. I’m not exactly sure what that powerup would or should be, so that’s were Oda’s creativity can come into play. This matchup would make sense because Usopp will eventually surpass his father, so Usopp could very likely become Luffy’s “YC3”, and also, Usopp needs to grow a lot stronger if he’s gonna surpass his dad soon. Oda may also want to maintain Usopp having one of the highest bounties in the crew, so he would have to do something more amazing than beating a F5. Lastly, it would be important for Usopp’s growth as a character and progression towards his dream for him to take on a strong melee fighter head-on instead of cowering away.

6. Momotaro Quartet vs Kaido, and Kid, Law, Drake, Apoo, Hawkins, and Killer vs Big Mom. These may still happen, but I’m putting this here in case they don’t

7. Daifuku, Compote, and the other BMPs on the Chanter vs Kid and Law’s crews. Let their crewmates somewhat important, instead of having them fight background fodders for the entire war

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Jew D. Boy

I Can Go Lower
#7
There’s an old adage in writing that I love for situations like this - if someone reads your work and says there’s something wrong with it, they’re almost certainly right; if they tell you what it is and how to fix it, they’re almost certainly wrong. A reader can identify when a story isn’t quite clicking like Wano for a lot of us, but ultimately, it’s not their story to tell and they shouldn’t be the ones making narrative revisions when they have no idea where it’s actually going. Not saying we need to trust Oda blindly (God knows I’ve spent a lot of words on this site doing the opposite) or there’s no place for speculative rewrites in the fandom, but for all his missteps, I know that nobody here could have done an objectively better job, anyone on this forum would have been way more biased and myopic if they’d penned the raid.
 

Warchief Sanji D Goat

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#8
Did you even read the post
Duh. I wouldn't comment on a thread if I didn't even read it (except for Kaido D. Stronger's threads).

If Usopp and Nami could barely scratch Page One who is below Jack then I don't see why Usopp beating Jack even if he's nerfed. Usopp will get stronger due to his evasion and sniping skills. Not close combat melee.
 
#9
There’s an old adage in writing that I love for situations like this - if someone reads your work and says there’s something wrong with it, they’re almost certainly right; if they tell you what it is and how to fix it, they’re almost certainly wrong. A reader can identify when a story isn’t quite clicking like Wano for a lot of us, but ultimately, it’s not their story to tell and they shouldn’t be the ones making narrative revisions when they have no idea where it’s actually going. Not saying we need to trust Oda blindly (God knows I’ve spent a lot of words on this site doing the opposite) or there’s no place for speculative rewrites in the fandom, but for all his missteps, I know that nobody here could have done an objectively better job, anyone on this forum would have been way more biased and myopic if they’d penned the raid.
Most people here would have written a DBZ-esque fanfic about Zoro soloing everyone @Jew D. Boy sorry idk why automerge just deleted half my post lol
Duh. I wouldn't comment on a thread if I didn't even read it (except for Kaido D. Stronger's threads).

If Usopp and Nami could barely scratch Page One who is below Jack then I don't see why Usopp beating Jack even if he's nerfed. Usopp will get stronger due to his evasion and sniping skills. Not close combat melee.
Usopp would get CoA and some other power up to greatly enhance his AP
 
#11
Luffy vs Kaido (Luffy runs out of haki and needs to take a breather)
Straw hats vs Kaido (similar to Oars which is still one of the best fight in one piece)

Luffys top 3 men vs Kaidos top 3 men:
Zoro vs King
Sanji vs Queen
Usopp vs Jack - Kabuto eats Orochis devil fruit after orochi gets betrayed and killed

Luffys Kunoichi vs kaidos top Ninja
Nami vs Fukurokujo

Rock music vs Hip Hop:
Brook vs Apoo

Miscellaneous fights
Jinbe vs Whos Who
Denjiro vs Sasaki
Robin vs Black Maria
Chopper vs Page One
Franky vs Ulti

Kinemon vs Kanjuro
 

Jew D. Boy

I Can Go Lower
#12
Most people here would have written a DBZ-esque fanfic about Zoro soloing everyone @Jew D. Boy sorry idk why automerge just deleted half my post lol
Was wondering where you were going with the first version, hahaha…I mean, as much as I’d love to see that happen, it would be a tremendously shortsighted choice and shunt so many important characters to the background at a time when a lot of us are upset with how little the other SHP get to do as it is. That’s why I’m saying we can all recognize that Wano isn’t as good or even as legible as we hoped, but when it comes to fixing the problems, I wouldn’t let anyone here get within 500 miles of Oda’s drafting desk.
 

Finalbeta

Hero of Albion
#15
I think most are decent and very significative.

But Oda is currently lacking to portray a great finale vs Jack and there are some very compelling options, I hope he goes with the dukes ones.

Also Nami and Usopp lacked a proper showdown.

I think Brook is still missing it too.

I think Killer didn't deserve to be placed against Hawkins but hey Hawkins had to be assigned to someone it does seem.
 
#16
Luffy and Zoro vs Kaido
Kidd, Killer and Law vs Big Mom
Sanji vs King ( they're both flying i still don't understand why Oda gave King the flying fruit and not Queen )
X-Drake ( and Chopper for the cure ) vs Queen
Jinbe vs Jack ( Both Fishman )
Brook vs Who's Who
Franky vs Sasaki
Robin vs Black Maria
Nami vs Ulti
Usopp vs Page One
 
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