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Strawhats party with the giants. Urouge joins the feast. He talks about his plan of going to the Moon. Luffy gets excited, wants to do that too. The two make a pact, to travel to space together. Meanwhile, fishermen bring newspapers to the Owl Library. Robin reads them and is shocked. She has to tell Luffy. Back to the party, Luffy has found the key and snuck it into his pocket. He says he has to pee and starts going into Loki's direction. Sanji is suspicious and follow him. When Robin arrives, Luffy is gone. She tells the rest that Akainu plans to execute Law (and Bartolomeo, but she cares mostly about Law).

Luffy finds Loki and wants to free him. Evil Shanks appears aswell. Luffy is confused. At the same time, the real Shanks comes back to Elbaf. While Luffy is busy fighting Evil Shanks, the female Holy Knight tries to kill Loki, to get his Devilfruit. Sanji arrives. He wanted to prevent Luffy from releasing Loki, but now does it himself, because he can't harm the Holy Knight. Freed, Loki turns into the Ear God and jumps away. The Holy Knights realize they failed their mission and disappear via the circles.

Strawhats go back to the banquet and learn the news. Luffy confronts Shanks and blames him for the capture of Bartolomeo. Zoro draws his sword. Shanks messed with their Grandfleet, doesn't matter that he was Luffy's friend, they are enemies now. Luffy tells him to step aside and punches Shanks. Redhair goes down. Giants are shocked. Shanks gets up, says it was a good shot, it hurt. Everyone relaxes. Usopp talks to his father. Strawhats start to plan how to stop the executions. Suddenly, Blackbeard's Fleet is sighted near Elbaf. He wants to take out Shanks and get the final Road Poneglyph.

Luffy is torn, he wants to help the Giants and the Redhair Pirates, but he also must hurry. Shanks tells him to go, he can handle Blackbeard. The Man Marked by Flames departs Warland. Blackbeard Pirates set foot on Elbaf, Kid and Killer are with them. Kid says he can't wait to settle the score with Shanks. Teach tells him, he is the one that will take out Redhair. Shanks tells his allies that he has an ace up his sleeve. When Blackbeard Pirates and Redhair Pirates come face to face, Kuzan goes over to the other side. He says hello to Saul. Kid gets very angry, screams that Kuzan is a damn traitor, that he will pulverize him for that. Strawhats sail to New Marineford, while RHP+Kuzan & Saul start fighting BBP+Kid & Killer.
 
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