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Mmm... The giants are here to spread havoc, so I'd expect an emergency escape.
Even the giants could sacrifice themselves for the Strawhats safety to Elbaf as a will trial.
Not a bad idea, if you like a character then go for it but don't listen agendas bullshit or "hey, he's weak hehe" this destroy the series and its own characters because people only focus on childish arguments of strength instead to give more importance to dessign, backstory, connections...
For example: swordsmen fanatism.
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Even the giants could sacrifice themselves for the Strawhats safety to Elbaf as a will trial.
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Not a bad idea, if you like a character then go for it but don't listen agendas bullshit or "hey, he's weak hehe" this destroy the series and its own characters because people only focus on childish arguments of strength instead to give more importance to dessign, backstory, connections...
For example: swordsmen fanatism.
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INT. MARIEJOIS - GOROSEI CHAMBER - DAY
The Gorosei, the highest authority in the World Government, gather for a meeting. The youngest Gorosei member, a blonde one, excitedly interrupts the discussion.
YOUNG GOROSEI
Hey guys, have any of you watched that new show "Better Call Saul"? It's fantastic!
OLD GOROSEI #1
Better call what now?
OLD GOROSEI #2
Saul? Is he related to Sengoku?
YOUNG GOROSEI
No, no! It's about this lawyer, not a marine. Great plot twists and character development.
OLD GOROSEI #3
Oh, I remember now. You mean that show, Buster Call Saul?
YOUNG GOROSEI
No, no! It's "Better Call Saul." You know, a legal drama.
OLD GOROSEI #1
Buster Call? Wasn't that the giant attack on Ohara?
OLD GOROSEI #2
Maybe it's a new tactic. Let's launch a Buster Call on Elbaf. Why not?
YOUNG GOROSEI
Wait, no! That's not what I said. Elbaf is innocent!
INT. ELBAF - SAUL'S HOUSE - DAY
In Elbaf, the giant Saul is peacefully sipping tea in his cozy home, unaware of the impending chaos.
SAUL
Ah, life is good. No more legal troubles. Just peaceful giant-sized relaxation.
EXT. ELBAF - MARINE FLEET APPROACHES - DAY
A massive Marine fleet, led by Admiral Akainu, sails toward Elbaf.
AKAINU
Buster Call initiated. Target: Elbaf.
INT. MARIEJOIS - GOROSEI CHAMBER - DAY
The young Gorosei member panics, realizing the misunderstanding.
YOUNG GOROSEI
No, you fools! I said "Better Call Saul," not "Buster Call Saul"!
OLD GOROSEI #3
What did you say? Speak up, young one!
YOUNG GOROSEI
Abort the Buster Call! It's a TV show recommendation, not a military operation!
INT. ELBAF - SAUL'S HOUSE - DAY
The ground shakes as the Buster Call begins, Saul looks out the window and sees the approaching fleet.
SAUL
Ah, ship! Here we go again!
INT. MARIEJOIS - GOROSEI CHAMBER - DAY
The Gorosei members scramble to call off the Buster Call.
YOUNG GOROSEI
I can't believe this! I just wanted to recommend a show!
OLD GOROSEI #1
Maybe we should stick to watching marine documentaries.
OLD GOROSEI #2
At least we tried something new for once.
INT. ELBAF - SAUL'S HOUSE - DAY
As the Buster Call ceases, Saul looks around, relieved but still baffled.
SAUL
Well, that was unexpected. I guess even giants have their own drama.
FADE OUT.
The Gorosei, the highest authority in the World Government, gather for a meeting. The youngest Gorosei member, a blonde one, excitedly interrupts the discussion.
YOUNG GOROSEI
Hey guys, have any of you watched that new show "Better Call Saul"? It's fantastic!
OLD GOROSEI #1
Better call what now?
OLD GOROSEI #2
Saul? Is he related to Sengoku?
YOUNG GOROSEI
No, no! It's about this lawyer, not a marine. Great plot twists and character development.
OLD GOROSEI #3
Oh, I remember now. You mean that show, Buster Call Saul?
YOUNG GOROSEI
No, no! It's "Better Call Saul." You know, a legal drama.
OLD GOROSEI #1
Buster Call? Wasn't that the giant attack on Ohara?
OLD GOROSEI #2
Maybe it's a new tactic. Let's launch a Buster Call on Elbaf. Why not?
YOUNG GOROSEI
Wait, no! That's not what I said. Elbaf is innocent!
INT. ELBAF - SAUL'S HOUSE - DAY
In Elbaf, the giant Saul is peacefully sipping tea in his cozy home, unaware of the impending chaos.
SAUL
Ah, life is good. No more legal troubles. Just peaceful giant-sized relaxation.
EXT. ELBAF - MARINE FLEET APPROACHES - DAY
A massive Marine fleet, led by Admiral Akainu, sails toward Elbaf.
AKAINU
Buster Call initiated. Target: Elbaf.
INT. MARIEJOIS - GOROSEI CHAMBER - DAY
The young Gorosei member panics, realizing the misunderstanding.
YOUNG GOROSEI
No, you fools! I said "Better Call Saul," not "Buster Call Saul"!
OLD GOROSEI #3
What did you say? Speak up, young one!
YOUNG GOROSEI
Abort the Buster Call! It's a TV show recommendation, not a military operation!
INT. ELBAF - SAUL'S HOUSE - DAY
The ground shakes as the Buster Call begins, Saul looks out the window and sees the approaching fleet.
SAUL
Ah, ship! Here we go again!
INT. MARIEJOIS - GOROSEI CHAMBER - DAY
The Gorosei members scramble to call off the Buster Call.
YOUNG GOROSEI
I can't believe this! I just wanted to recommend a show!
OLD GOROSEI #1
Maybe we should stick to watching marine documentaries.
OLD GOROSEI #2
At least we tried something new for once.
INT. ELBAF - SAUL'S HOUSE - DAY
As the Buster Call ceases, Saul looks around, relieved but still baffled.
SAUL
Well, that was unexpected. I guess even giants have their own drama.
FADE OUT.
Where are the transitions? You can't just change scenes without "CUT TO", "DISSOLVE TO", "CUT AWAY", etc
Also it's a hard coded rule in screenwriting that you can only write what you see in the screen. So describing what a character is feeling is a no-no. You have to show their emotions or thoughts through dialogues/action.
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Also it's a hard coded rule in screenwriting that you can only write what you see in the screen. So describing what a character is feeling is a no-no. You have to show their emotions or thoughts through dialogues/action.
