My very own isekai light novel called ''Reincarnated in a World ruled by Demons''

How do you like the novel I created?

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#1
Hello everyone!

After some motivating speech of @solis I literally created my own story which I want to turn into a webcomic soon.
I would love to hear what you guys think about the story. I know my english sucks and I kinda used a translator as a help to translate the story from german into english, so that everyone can enjoy the story!

You can read the story for free on this site:
Reincarnated in a World ruled by Demons - Prologue | Scribble Hub

For germans here to go buddies:
Reincarnated in a World ruled by Demons :: Kapitel 1 :: von BornInAbyss :: Prosa > Fantasy > Allgemein | FanFiktion.de

Inhaltliche Zusammenfassung:
In einer Welt von mächtigen, fast götterähnlichen Wesen, soll durch seine adelige Abstammung bekräftigt Aramoto Kakumo bestehen, um eine Welt von den mächtigen Wesen der Finsternis zu befreien. Diesen Auftrag gab ihm sein Bruder Kishimoto Kakumo kurz vor seinem unerklärlichen Verschwinden. Zugleich überreichte er ihm sein Erbe in der Gestalt einer kristallenen Halskette, die ungeahnte Fähigkeiten hat, wenn man vor ihr einen geheimen Spruch laut ausspricht und den Kristall mit einem göttlichen Licht in Verbindung bringt. Diesen Spruch kennt aber nur ein himmlischer Engel, um dessen Hilfe Aramoto flehen muss. Aramoto verliert in der Folge seiner Abenteuer seine Familie und seine Heimat Marlovina. Als er in dem Begriffe steht, den himmlischen Engel um Beistand zu bitten, begegnet er schicksalshaft einer jungen Frau, die vorgibt, zu wissen wo sich dieser himmlischer Engel befindet, den Aramoto um Beistand bitten soll. Beide brechen nun gemeinsam auf, um Aramatos Auftrag auszuführen.

Short Summary of the story:
In a world of powerful, almost god-like beings, strengthened by his noble lineage, Aramoto Kakumo shall exist to rid a world of the powerful beings of darkness. His brother Kishimoto Kakumo gave him this task shortly before his inexplicable disappearance. At the same time, he presented him with his inheritance in the form of a crystal necklace, which has unexpected abilities if you speak a secret spell out loud in front of it and associate the crystal with a divine light. But only a heavenly angel knows this spell, for whose help Aramoto has to beg. As a result of his adventures, Aramoto loses his family and his homeland of Marlovina. As he is about to ask the heavenly angel for help, he fatefully meets a young woman who pretends to know the whereabouts of the heavenly angel whom Aramoto is supposed to ask for help. Both now set off together to carry out Aramato's mission.


It has 29 Chapters as for now, but I will keep writing and uploading more if the feedback is wishing for more! :D

Best Regards!

Edit:
Here is the finished Cover:
 
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Ballel

#6
Hello everyone!

After some motivating speech of @solis I literally created my own story which I want to turn into a webcomic soon.
I would love to hear what you guys think about the story. I know my english sucks and I kinda used a translator as a help to translate the story from german into english, so that everyone can enjoy the story!

You can read the story for free on this site:
Belletristica

It has 10 Chapters as for now, but I will keep writing and uploading more if the feedback is wishing for more! :D

Best Regards!
Wow, 10 chapters already! You wrote fast.

I'll read the rest as soon as I have time.

Will you draw it as a webcomic?
 
#8
Wow, 10 chapters already! You wrote fast.

I'll read the rest as soon as I have time.

Will you draw it as a webcomic?
Unfortunately I cannot draw. I will have to find and ask someone who can draw for that.

Maybe I am in luck and my story gets popular very fast and a creator asks me instead to draw the story haha.

Thanks, do you want to read the english version or the german one? I can send you the german version instead if its more comfortable for you. :3
 
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Ballel

#9
Unfortunately I cannot draw. I will have to find and ask someone who can draw for that.

Maybe I am in luck and my story gets popular very fast and a creator asks me instead to draw the story haha.

Thanks, do you want to read the english version or the german one? I can send you the german version instead if its more comfortable for you. :3
Did you write the whole 10 chaps in German first and then translated it?

You can just update the first post and add the German link.
 
#14
I've made a short summary of the approximate plot:

Inhaltliche Zusammenfassung:
In einer Welt von mächtigen, fast götterähnlichen Wesen, soll durch seine adelige Abstammung bekräftigt Aramoto Kakumo bestehen, um eine Welt von den mächtigen Wesen der Finsternis zu befreien. Diesen Auftrag gab ihm sein Bruder Kishimoto Kakumo kurz vor seinem unerklärlichen Verschwinden. Zugleich überreichte er ihm sein Erbe in der Gestalt einer kristallenen Halskette, die ungeahnte Fähigkeiten hat, wenn man vor ihr einen geheimen Spruch laut ausspricht und den Kristall mit einem göttlichen Licht in Verbindung bringt. Diesen Spruch kennt aber nur ein himmlischer Engel, um dessen Hilfe Aramoto flehen muss. Aramoto verliert in der Folge seiner Abenteuer seine Familie und seine Heimat Marlovina. Als er in dem Begriffe steht, den himmlischen Engel um Beistand zu bitten, begegnet er schicksalshaft einer jungen Frau, die vorgibt, zu wissen wo sich dieser himmlischer Engel befindet, den Aramoto um Beistand bitten soll. Beide brechen nun gemeinsam auf, um Aramatos Auftrag auszuführen.

Short Summary of the story:
In a world of powerful, almost god-like beings, strengthened by his noble lineage, Aramoto Kakumo shall exist to rid a world of the powerful beings of darkness. His brother Kishimoto Kakumo gave him this task shortly before his inexplicable disappearance. At the same time, he presented him with his inheritance in the form of a crystal necklace, which has unexpected abilities if you speak a secret spell out loud in front of it and associate the crystal with a divine light. But only a heavenly angel knows this spell, for whose help Aramoto has to beg. As a result of his adventures, Aramoto loses his family and his homeland of Marlovina. As he is about to ask the heavenly angel for help, he fatefully meets a young woman who pretends to know the whereabouts of the heavenly angel whom Aramoto is supposed to ask for help. Both now set off together to carry out Aramato's mission.
 
#19
Because I like japanese culture and I wanted to make an anime like novel

Good question. :D
Okay this might just be me being a snob so don't take my opinion too seriously

But I feel like this is a thing that a lot of anime fans do and I think that your story might stand out a lot more if the characters were truer to yourself.
Like if you are german, this story is primarily written in german, and you are publishing it on a german site, I feel like it would make more sense if the characters were german.
 
#20
Okay this might just be me being a snob so don't take my opinion too seriously

But I feel like this is a thing that a lot of anime fans do and I think that your story might stand out a lot more if the characters were truer to yourself.
Like if you are german, this story is primarily written in german, and you are publishing it on a german site, I feel like it would make more sense if the characters were german.
I respect your opinion. I understand I am for the most part writing in german and translating it into english. But I really like these names I came up with. I think if the characters would have german names it would be less impactful imo.
 
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