Character Discussion How would you rewrite Kaidou?

#1
There's a great thread from @VinTheMistborn about rewriting Big Mom. So i wait for someone else to post a thread for Kaidou's rewrite but no one did. I guess i'll make it.

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How would you rewrite Kaidou?

- What will be his epithet and title? Same as the manga or different?

- How will be his appearance? Same as the manga or different?

- What is his mind and personality like? His signature trait? His feelings about things? His intelligence? His approach?

- What will be his past history, current endeavors, and future vision / motivation? What is his endgame? What is his dream?

- What are his strengths and weaknesses? His ability? His Devil Fruit? Haki? His unique power?
 
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#4
I would make him kill the scabbards, kid's crew, smile users that's unable to control their fruit, people that pisses him off and bonk queen whenever he does stupid shit

As for his personality, I want him to be more like Yujiro instead of the drunkard that we have now and make him shorter
Maybe just as big as doffy
 
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#5
There's a great thread from @VinTheMistborn about rewriting Big Mom. So i wait for someone else to post a thread for Kaidou's rewrite but no one did. I guess i'll make it.

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How would you rewrite Kaidou?

- What will be his epithet and title? Same as the manga or different?

- How will be his appearance? Same as the manga or different?

- What is his mind and personality like? His signature trait? His feelings about things? His intelligence? His approach?

- What will be his past history, current endeavors, and future vision / motivation? What is his endgame? What is his dream?

- What are his strengths and weaknesses? His ability? His Devil Fruit? Haki? His unique power?
Would allow him to kill scabbards for sure

His personality is okay, Oda just refused to properly flesh out his backstory

He was portrayed to be more than a just a brainless brute that seemly had plans and interesting motives but....
 
#6
Thanks for the mention!! Glad you liked my thread! I'll give my two cents on Kaido's rewrite.

- Kaido's epithet will be "Hundred Beast." Emperor epithets are great and I wish he had one that everyone calls him. His title is still "The Strongest Creature in the World" but for different reasons than canon.

- Kaido will be a human as tall or shorter than the average man's height: 5'10". Because he's short compared to the abnormally tall characters of the One Piece world, and has virtually the most powerful and scariest Zoan, he is known as The Strongest Creature in the World. Kaido's canon Oni design will be reserved for one of his Four Calamities. Among the Beasts Pirates his title is "Supreme Commander."

- Like the BM in my rewrite, he would despise the captaining style of canon Kaido. The Beasts Pirates are a crew supportive of each other and dedicated to their captain, composed of persecuted or downtrodden humans, many races, sexual orientations, and gender identities around the world. Because of this motif, the presence of meritocracy, and Kaido's hate of infighting, his crew is exponentially more powerful, smarter, and capable than the canon Beasts Pirates. When occupying Wano he improves the literacy rate, tries to reduce poverty, and deposes the many warlords present before his arrival. As a result, the Samurai are stronger and the people of Wano see his occupation as a good thing. Samurai are also in his forces, which is part of the reason Linlin takes control of Elbaf.

- He used to be a slave that joined the Rocks Pirates as Xebec's apprentice, who recruited him because of a demonstration of unconscious Conqueror's Haki. Xebec gave him the Hebi Hebi no Mi: Model, Yamata no Orochi. Kaido then became friends with the already experienced and powerful Edward Newgate and Charlotte Linlin, and sparred with them to gradually become their eventual equal. Kaido participated in the constant infighting of the Rocks Pirates, but only to complement his training/sparring with real battle experience. His dream is to create a world where all races and people can live without being persecuted, while his endgame is to destroy everything about the World Government. The Beasts Pirates' current endeavors are improving Wano, destroying World Government countries, and amassing weaponry.

- If Whitebeard is an earthquake, and rewrite Linlin is a Norse God, then Kaido is a Kaiju. His Yamata no Orochi fruit bestows him with regeneration, flight, weather control, manipulation of gravity and gravitational energy, and atomic energy manipulation(without the radiation). Unlike canon Kaido, he takes advantage of his extraordinary speed and Haki instead of tanking everything without Haki. He fights in human or hybrid form by combining martial arts moves with bojutsu, complemented with advanced applications of all Haki types. Weaknesses in full Zoan form are the same as Kaido's canon fruit, so it is only used when intimidating weak armies.

EXTRA NOTE: Rewrite Kaido might be a woman. So the New World's rulers would be two female Emperors and two male Emperors.
 
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#8
There's a great thread from @VinTheMistborn about rewriting Big Mom. So i wait for someone else to post a thread for Kaidou's rewrite but no one did. I guess i'll make it.

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How would you rewrite Kaidou?

- What will be his epithet and title? Same as the manga or different?

- How will be his appearance? Same as the manga or different?

- What is his mind and personality like? His signature trait? His feelings about things? His intelligence? His approach?

- What will be his past history, current endeavors, and future vision / motivation? What is his endgame? What is his dream?

- What are his strengths and weaknesses? His ability? His Devil Fruit? Haki? His unique power?
Be defeated by Zoro for starters
 
#10
My concept of rewrite Kaidou:

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DESIGN

- a disproportionately, unnaturally tall, thin humanoid creature, like slenderman but much taller. Arms longer than legs. No clothes. He comes from a Race that is called The Towers. Tall, like 10 meters or so, but thin. And he is aquatic, he can live on the ground but his natural habitat is in the sea.



- On a natural state, his skin is transparent like that of a jellyfish, so that you can see his nerve fibers swimming inside his body. Some illustration of what his skin is like:



- He comes from an aquatic race with limited intelligence regarding communication, language, social or civilization. But this race, called The Towers, have innate ability to create pigments on their skin, thus changing their skin color at will.

- Fascinated about this ability, Kaidou instinctively learns about it, experimenting it everyday, with different color, different bodyparts of his, different pigment thickness, etc.

- Even though his linguistic intelligence can't even explain it to himself, he found something.

- Apparently, it's not an ability to change skin color. It's an ability to create matter itself.

Constantly experimenting with this everyday, Kaidou invents his core ability: World Chrysalis.

Kaidou creates his own original organic substance, growing a biological armor over his body lining. He can grow this substance on his skin for external protection, even grow it in his visceral organs etc for internal protection.

World Chrysalis needs extreme precision and feel to even manifest properly in basic form, let alone to advance, refine, and manipulate. It's only able to manifest due to Kaidou's absolute prodigal mastery over his own body, to the point that he can invent this original ability, and create an original matter, that never even exists before.

With the The World Chrysalis ability mastered, Kaidou is able to alter his size freely, to the point of becoming taller and larger than even Zunisha itself. Kaidou's mass also bulks, especially with World Chrysalis Armor equipped, becoming a literal Titan:






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STORY

In the past, Kaidou resides as The Monster King in Rusukaina Island (the island where Luffy trained). He was a sentient aquatic creature from The Towers race, without mathematical, linguistic, communication, or social intelligence.

- Rocks D. Xebec went to the island and wanted Kaidou, a lifeform without intelligence, as a combatant in his crew. To the surprise of even Edward Newgate and Charlotte Linlin, Kaidou showed an immeasurable power using the power of World Chrysalis, and defeated Xebec in a fight to the death.

- In the verge of death, Xebec used the Mind Mind Fruit, giving Kaidou the ability of comprehension and intelligence. Kaidou, surprised and shocked by his newfound state of mind, questioned Xebec's sanity for wanting a bizarre creature, that can kill him anytime, to join his crew.

- Xebec said confidently, "Saying that means you'll never do it."

- Xebec was right. Instead, Kaidou was grateful for the gift of intelligence, and joined Rocks Crew as Xebec's combatant. Charlotte Linlin offered him devil fruit of Azure Dragon, but Kaidou refused it due to his simplicity of not wanting to divide his focus over many types of powers, and chose to reach new heights of perfection over his own power of World Chrysalis.

During his journey aside Xebec, Kaidou learned about World Government, Celestial Dragons, Marines. All those so-called intelligent beings whose greed ravaged the lands, decimating the natural life while hiding behind policies, media, and military power.

Thus Kaidou's ambition began to grow. To unite all creatures, monsters, beasts, seakings, under his power. He will create The World of Violence. He will lead nature itself to consume the World Government, just like how The Government consumed the nature all this time. To return all life to what it should be.

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ABILITY

Usage conditions of World Chrysalis:

1. This ability enables Kaidou to freely alter his size and mass. He can become even larger than Zuunisha. But he can't turn smaller than his original, natural-state size (more or less 10 meters in height).

2. The Chrysalis armor can make Kaidou more susceptible to certain conditions depending on its types, but it can never be completely separated from Kaidou's body.

3. The armor can change into different types, each has different strengths.

4. Kaidou can use any amount, size, surface area width as he wills over his body or organs, but he only use one type of armor type at one time. The time required for Kaidou to switch Chrysalis types is almost instantaneous, as the biological armor itself is the same, he just change its microstructures thus its functions.

5. The magnitude of power displayed by World Chrysalis depends upon his emotional focus. Being able to direct his conviction on just one mission or his wrath to just one main enemy, will make his armor stronger in its function. Doubting his priorities and overthinking about which of the mission/opponents he should deal with, makes the armor weaker, its pores larger for enemies to exploit. (This point is inspired by Hunter x Hunter's Menthuthuyoupi)

Kaidou's mastery over World Chrysalis ability, is the core reason of Kaidou being World's Strongest Living Being.

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The types of World Chrysalis Armor (the armor changes form subtly whenever switched):

1. Devourer. Any attack and damage received will increase Kaidou's physical strength and attack power. To clarify, attacks and damage doesn't heal Kaidou. When Kaidou uses this, he will be an opponent who gets stronger each time he's damaged. The effect of increased strength and attack power is permanent.

2. Destroyer. Most destructive solid material in the world that tears apart every solid matter upon contact. Using his Chrysalis Destroyer as gauntlets, Kaidou can crush Seastones, Diamonds, The Red Line, the planet's crust or mantle layer, literally into jelly.

3. Ponderer. The Chrysalis Armor converts any non-solid elements in his surroundings into growth and regeneration factors, healing him. Kaidou must in the state of relaxation or rest to use this Armor. Yes, attacking Kaidou in this state using an elemental attack, will heal Kaidou instead. But since he's must be in the state of rest, usage of this Armor type makes Kaidou prone to physical attacks.

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NARRATIVE

- He finds tranquility in nature. He celebrates his victories alone, away from the wild underwater party of his gigantic monster troops.

- This is also why he want to give The World Government the taste of its own medicine. Kaidou wants to lead the nature's army to literally consume, eat The World Government, its members and structures.

- That was why he made Shirahoshi into his First Mate. Shirahoshi, as The Ancient Weapon Poseidon, can control the Strongest Seakings, Beasts, and Monsters with her call. A perfect First Mate for him.

- He also defeated and then recruited Aramaki, the brutal warrior with the power to rule over all plants, as The Second Mate.

- Kaidou prefers crushing his enemies by his hands in combat. Aside from World Chrysalis Armor, he doesn't like to use weapons.

- Kaidou has extreme power but he is quiet in his conviction and wisdom. He has nothing to proof to anyone, he seeks acknowledgement from no one.

- His presence is basically HxH's Meruem. Once Kaidou feels like going hostile, everything surrounding him surrenders and wilts due to the knowledge of an extreme difference in strength alone.

- Kaidou doesn't have comrades. He considers his subordinates as they are, an army.

- Kaidou also acknowledges power and wisdom, he recognizes that strength come in many forms. In war situations, Kaidou uses his brain and leadership to repel the strategy from the enemies, but lead his monster army to attack in straight-forward and simple manner. Since he believes in his strength, and he believes that his own power will inspire his troops to constantly strengthen themselves.

- Kaidou had convincingly stomped on Oden and his ideals, but left after victory. Orochi was the one executing Oden.

- In the past, Kaidou also had beaten Issho, Wano's renowned swordsman with gravity Devil Fruit. Kaidou told Issho to join him in his uncoming World of Violence since he deemed Issho worthy, but Issho refused and left to join The Marines instead, since he viewed Kaidou as too uncompromising and indiscriminate in his aggression to engulf World Government.

- The World Government tells about legend of Joy Boy, with some criteria involved. Kaidou ticks every box to be Joy Boy. Luffy is the one who breaks Joy Boy's legend.

- Apparently Luffy invents Toon Force G5 and beat him in a solidly-written battle full of ideological clashes, character development on both Luffy and Kaidou, witnessing Luffy's bond with his nakama, and something that never happens in Kaidou's life before: Luffy's creativity and battle IQ besting Kaidou's brutal force in combat. Kaidou finally find his true equal, both in power and conviction. An unforgettable, life-changing experience.
 
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#11
There's a great thread from @VinTheMistborn about rewriting Big Mom. So i wait for someone else to post a thread for Kaidou's rewrite but no one did. I guess i'll make it.

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How would you rewrite Kaidou?

- What will be his epithet and title? Same as the manga or different?

- How will be his appearance? Same as the manga or different?

- What is his mind and personality like? His signature trait? His feelings about things? His intelligence? His approach?

- What will be his past history, current endeavors, and future vision / motivation? What is his endgame? What is his dream?

- What are his strengths and weaknesses? His ability? His Devil Fruit? Haki? His unique power?
Rewrite? I thought Oda's writing of Kaido is peak fiction? :milaugh:

Kidding aside:

1. Keep his title and his design;

2. Make his W against Oden a clean one and don't make him an Oden-simp;

3. Make him a pure Straw Nihilist, which explains why he craves to destroy himself and the world. Naturally, his crew should also have this belief;

4. Make him born as a failed WG experiment who had to grow up knowing only a meaningless existence laced with torture and survival.

He then met Rocks after Rocks attacked the WG facility he was in and became fascinated by (and maybe even worshipped) his chaotic way of life and found meaning in Rock's ambition to be the King of the World.

However, as we all knew, Rocks failed and this deeply traumatized Kaido. He became so utterly cynical that he came to see the existence of the world as something to be destroyed since it doesn't really have a greater meaning to it. This is why he ultimately wants the One Piece: he does not know what it is, but he wants to find it to put an end to everyone and everything.

5. Keep him a dragon, but change his elemental powers into Dark Matter Manipulation, which can only be resisted physically by people with ACoA or ACoC. This would explain why anybody who is not a ACoA or a ACoC user must not fight him: they risk getting disintegrated in seconds.

Also, call his DF "the Darkest Devil Fruit" just like Teach's is "the Devil Fruit closest to the Devil himself."
 
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#14
I’d give him a proper flashback for starters.

I wouldn’t wank Oden at the expense of Kaido.

I’d give him awakening and make him not look like an idiot that tanks attacks for no reason outside PIS.
 
#15
Things to first pop into mind:

- Actually destroyed Oden in a fair 1v1.

- CP0 intervening never happened, Kaido outright destroys Luffy and makes everything seem hopeless before G5. Make Luffy unable to do the damage he did to Kaido with CoC up until G5.

- Zoan awakening.

- Never imprisoned Luffy at Udon, and instead tried to turn him into red mist during their fight at Kuri only for Luffy to get saved by Law or someone else to escape.

- Include more Super Rookies/characters in the rooftop to compensate for Kaido getting disgustingly nerfed.

- Actually let Kaido kill multiple scabbards or side characters.

- No leg day skipped, long sturdy legs like Whitebeard's.
 
#18
No Oden ptsd, just a good samurai who managed to scar him then got beaten in a 1v1
Give him the edge over Linlin
Portray him as an actual alcoholic who sobers with alcohol not vice versa. Only two modes, anxious angressive normally, clear minded and shrewd with alcohol
Better explain his alliance with Orochi, it seemed like a joke when he suddenly cut his head off, why did it take him 20 years to destroy flower capital etc
Backstory that explains his relationship to Rocks crew, at least Wb. Put more emphasis on his nihilistic nature.
No emotions towards Linlin
Give him a true bloody show where he actually manages to murder a couple of people
Not make him look like a clown against scabbards
 
#19
if i will rewrite Kaido, i will probably give him the appearance of Jack without the fishman thing, i will change his theme from Chinese with fu manchu mustache to bearded barbarian King, he will have that Viking or Germanic tribe vibes since he will be suited the brute persona , so from eastern he will have this european looks, his Mythical zoan will be Western Dragon, apart from fire he can turn his scale metal , he will have 3 stages, metalic dragon, rusted dragon then final form burning metalic dragon.
:steef:
 
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