Let me copy paste it, I like what I've done
(trying to create a pass for carrot to be reintroduced in the story)
Let's imagine rapidely:
- The strawhats are in a pinch, something went wrong and the coup de burst is not enough to go away from the marine.
- Its foggy all arround, the strawhats are surrounded but the marine can't shoot
- Lucci uses a tronsponder snale to give the location of the strawhats. Everyone jumps on him
- Panic aboard, Lucci start fighting, Kaku doesn't understand and doesn't fight
- The fog start to vanish, its a burster call scenario, the Sunny is surrounded. Lucci jump out.
- Moment of panic, the Marine are about to strike
- BROUUUUUUUUUAAA a giant shadow appears behind the smoke..
- THe marines start panicking, something is on their ship
- We can see ray of lighting going from ship to ship
- "Shot down the strawhats"
- Canon fired... a... marine ship is touched
- Suddenly, all the ship start derivating, some are shooting other
- Boat are sinking all over
- Usopp and Chopper are crying in each others arm "what is happening???"
- At roughly 300m away of them the rest of the navy fleet is in standby
- Kizaru is resting with bandages in the room of the Elder. A vice admiral is taking a call
- "sir, there everywhere" "What's happening?" "There is island" Its all whit.. glrmburmhhh..."
- Shot fired, this time from another ship..
- We see a mouth with a dendenmushi "Zunisha, take care of the last one"
- At this moment A huge trunk slashes the entire fleet in front of the strawhat
- The strawhat are exploding with joy
- Jay Saturn, surprised and sweating "Zunisha ?????"
- The voice continues :" Marines... BACK OFF....
- Two strike of lighting return on their ship
- We see a double page.. Carrot, in Sulong is in front of her ship, a dendenmushi in her hand, behind her the three musketeers and the Guardians in Sulong also . she continues: "DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH TO MY FRIENDS"
End of chapter.
That was for the introduction. Now I will just give small hint here and there I won't detail the rest like that:
New chapter
- The Marine are now in a pinch.. Saturn is angry..
- There is a discussion.. then he demands to his fleet to back off "tell Lucci to stop the attack"
- The strawhats are Free at last, they are happy
- A strike of lighting appears on the ship, its Carrot, "GARCHU LUFFYYYYYYY" she goes straight for luffy who is projeted in a wall
- Their is a reunion, the strawhat are happy to see Carrot
- "Carrot, why are you here ?"
- "Hm... I think I made a mistake" she say while laughing.
- The strawhats arrive nearby the ship of the mink...
- Everyone has a grim face.. Everyone looks depressed
- "What is happening Carrot ?" says Nami
- "uh.."
- The group arrive at the mokomo dukedom.. but nothing has changed.. They arrive in front of what is the entrance to the city..
- The mink depressed.. start speaking while opening the door.. "Please...."
- the scene is surreal, there is fire everywhere, building are starting to fall down, road are smelly, its chaos
- THe minks continues while all crying "HELP USSSSSS"
- Carrot has an embarrassed smile to the readers "hahaha"
End of Chapter
- The strawhats question Carrot about Zunisha, she tells them that at one point, she started to hear him (flashback)
- Carrot tells them that he lead her to something else
- Carrot leads the group toward a huge entrance below the giant whale
- There is a poneglyph inside
- Robin reads it, it about a group of 14 individual who are defeated by a strong ennemy
- The crew starts helping the villagers when a ship fall from the sky
- Its the News Morgan's ship.
End of Chapter
- Vivi and the strawhats reunite
- Flashback, we understand that Vivi took over the ship to go to the localization of the dendenmushi and crashed
- Vivi understand the situation of the village and take over the lead of the reperations
- In a single day everything is shining like a cartoon book
- Carrot is amazed of what Vivi accomplished "you have so much confidence" she says to Vivi.
- The strawhat explain that Zunisha will escort them to Elbaf
- Morgan escapes
Here as you can see I planted shadowings and therefore setup Carrot to become something more. The entire reason of showing her lack of capacity was to setup a foundamental flaw that we can use later, Carrot lack confidence. We will understand later that her fight with Perospero completely shattered her, she is now afraid of taking part in a fight, unless she goes into Sulong. This will create a funny dynamic, a bit like Usopp with Sogeking. We can imagine that because of Moargan's escape and the stop of the Marine, Carrot has now a bounty on her head, Carrot chooses that opportunity to go with the strawhat and especially VIvi who she admires.
Now we can at last explore her adventurous side of her.. we can imagine that her first enemy will be beaten not in Sulong but in base form.. this could create a good kickoff for a character arc.. Now for the character arc.. it could be a lot of things, we could for example dive into her past and the fact that she might not be a normal mink as she was found by Pedro at sea (this is a theory of mine) we could also explore how she can gain confidence through the straw hats.. there is a lot of way to do it.. We could also explore her potential link with the dawn.. etc.
As you can see, its pretty easy to create something with what Oda has already written for Carrot. Its all a question of creativity, imagine that I did that rapidely, Oda has months..
Wuat ? Why are you saying that lmao ??
Don't worry.. it will be okay
#trololololo
oh.. psychophobia. Fun.