Controversial I decided to rename and rewrite my old light novel into something fresh

BornInAbyss

BornInAbyss

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As few of you guys know, I am very active in sharing my creative ideas. I have a lot of ideas actually, that would make a good story. Previously I started a light novel called „Reincarnated in a World ruled by Demons“. However I feel like it has been rushed by me pretty hard and I kind of forced myself to write and finish the story which I did. But the result was pretty meh.

I would like to present you my new project called „Rulers of the Darkness“. My old light novel was a tryhard isekai wanna be story. I removed the isekai aspect and purely focused on dark fantasy elements. Such as magic powers and overpowered protagonists.

I have written 3 Chapters for now and I would ask you for your attention and your opinion about only the story. Is it good? Is it worth your time reading it? Do you want more? Etc.

You can read the story in scribble hub with this link https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1245664-rulers-of-darkness/chapter/1245673/

Here is a short synopsis of my ongoing story:
Marlorvina is annihilated by the High Council. They are searching for the Merthyl Crystal, which hangs on Aramoto’s necklace. He received the necklace from Kishimoto before the latter disappeared without a trace. In the process, Aramoto loses his wife Shelly and his daughter Lisha. Weakened by the suffering of fate, Aramoto embarks on a torturous and aimless journey. Along the way, he ends up in the deadly Satsujin Desert, which plays with his mind, making him see and hear things that aren’t there. Subsequently, completely overtaken by madness, he loses consciousness. But he is saved by someone, someone who would restore his lost will to live and hope.

Here is the cover from the story:

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Would someone be kind and put some tags in the replys for more attention? Thx!
 
BornInAbyss

BornInAbyss

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Any reviews yet? I already wrote 7 Chapters as of today.

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A new cover for the book itself:

 
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