Chapter Discussion FINAL VEREDICT on God Valley Incident

#65
Nan flashback are always rushed and very poor feat wise

Oda never explores fights during flashback

It’s not the same during the main event : SH vs Beast Pirate and Oden vs Kaido were treated quite differently
There will be more top tiers in the final war than they were in GV.
Oda can't handle more than 2-3 strong characters.
Just look what he did to Meme or Mihawk,Sweatgoku etc in MF.
 

Marimo_420

The Honoured One
#66
Gooner valley. Stupidest reason for everyone to gather.

Rocks and every pirate being friends instead of actual pirates. No anonymity between any of them.

Whitebeard "oh no my captain grew horns and started attacking me, he must have hated us" top tier retard, then ran away.

Herald the second coming of Oden. Both bums.

Fights? Shit.

"His haki is unbelievable!!!!!. Let's break it using more haki!!!!"

Garp reaaaalllly isn't redeemed by the way. He's still a bum for achieving nothing and staying in the navy for 30 years.
17 year old Dragon did more and is still doing alot more. Fujitora did more in 6 months.

He a bum.
 

RayanOO

Lazy is the way
#67
There will be more top tiers in the final war than they were in GV.
Oda can't handle more than 2-3 strong characters.
Just look what he did to Meme or Mihawk,Sweatgoku etc in MF.
Where I agree with you is that Oda will have hugeee difficulties to handle that many top tiers during the last war

Knowing his history yeah some of them will maybe have the short end of the stick

The ones who will fight the main SH and maybe Dragon will have spotlights and respect . The rest may be butchered.
 
#71
8 / 10 for me.

Although - imagine if we hadn't seen the madness we witnessed on Egg Head and Elbaf before - like - WOW IMU TOOK CONTROL OF SATURN - yes but we've seen it before - WOW Saturn is a giant arachnid - yes we already knew that - WOW Garp and Roger together ?!?!?!? Yea. etc. etc.
Imagine if we didin't get telegraphic summary of events from chapter 957 - then some moments would definitely have had a bigger impact.

I really enjoyed it anyway, because we got a lot of interesting stuff, and some of the best action scenes in history.
Bro, when these events appear in the anime, people's eyes will be popping out of their skulls.


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#75
The good:
- Young Kaido and Shiki were hilarious
- Wragon looks like a hero now
- Blackbeard's mom and dad are awesome
- WB got some hype moments, looked pretty good powerscaling wise and the scenes with him, Kaido and Rocks were pretty sweet
- Silver Axe's entrance
- Getting more insight and lore about the world and characters
- Roger actually has a personality that isn't Gol D Luffy
- Garling being a comically evil punching bag
- Garp maintained the agenda and his determination to protect weaker marines actually explains his motivations
- Tiny Katakuri aura farming
- End of the myth of old gen superiority; older top tiers are not far above mid gen and this fb proves it IMO
- Imu actually did something!
- I actually like Harald. People call him a retard but IMO him doubling down makes sense. He probably knew that Rocks being a lawless berserker would make him a poor king, and seeing him ultimately be destroyed at GV would have convinced him that it was better for his people to remain with the WG. He's still a people pleasing coward, but not a complete moron IMO.

The bad:
- Shakky subplot. I wouldn't even mind it so much if it wasn't so mediocre in execution. It's not even unbelievable since men have gone to war over women before but the execution is bad

Also young Shakky doesn't look that hot at all frankly.
- WB being a gooner
- WB being a runner
- WB being a paranoid flake and dipping the moment after Rocks attacks
- Fuck it, WB should not have been a Rocks member at all. Or Lolden's "big bro". Oda should've done right by Oyaji and left him as a badass powerful pirate captain who was coexisting with Rocks and Roger.
Hell he could even have had Sengoku be responsible for battling WB elsewhere while GV was ongoing, which would establish them as "powerful bystanders"

- Speaking of, Sengoku is now a giant golden wagecuck who is literally everything Kizaru's been slandered for. Y u do this Oda?
- Our opponent has more haki so lets beat him with even more haki. Much creative, yay!
- Clash piece
- ONE scene of dialogue between Dragon and Garp, and it sounds like an edgy teen going I hAtE yOu to his uninterested father
- Everything about Silver Axe after being introduced.
- Where are the Admirals of the time? What is Kong doing? Why is Garp the only relevant Marine Oda pls.
 
#77
Actually, yeah, this is very weird considering that Whitebeard got stabbed in the chest by Squard (who wasn't even turned into a demon by anyone, he was just gullible) and still went out of his way to forgive him and let him go, yet he gets hit by a suspiciously demonic looking Xebec once and suddenly all bets are off??
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The worst part of GV(if it doesn't get addressed), is everyone being blind and thinking Xebec straight up betrayed them. Even WB was disappointed at Xebec and left him to die. They literally watched Xebec get stabbed, grow 3 times in size, grow horns, wings, and fangs, and immediately start obeying Imu's commands.

It makes everyone look like idiots, and WB look especially bad since the proud family man didnt even bother to question Xebec and dipped without a problem. Left all his brothers and sisters to do his own thing without reaching out. Really hope Oda fixes this.
As a reader, your plot savvy makes you blind to character perspectives. Who is Imu?

Ed wouldn't know if the change was voluntary or permanent and clearly didn't possess the power to do anything about it. It took every drop of strength from Roger and Garp combined, but they had different motivations and it's not like they had much beyond a clue despite the voice of all things.

Brothers and sisters is just something you made up. It was not his crew and not the way Rocks created his structure; actually the opposite. There's a problem in assuming Ed didn't change in character or strength in all those years, and that he had the same standards as a member that he did as his own captain.
Actually, yeah, this is very weird considering that Whitebeard got stabbed in the chest by Squard (who wasn't even turned into a demon by anyone, he was just gullible) and still went out of his way to forgive him and let him go, yet he gets hit by a suspiciously demonic looking Xebec once and suddenly all bets are off??
Confirmed conquerors: Linlin, Kaido, Ed, Gaban, and Ray. They all missed it which is a deliberate point, Garp and Roger only caught it because they're blessed with a particular ability.

Did Ed reason with Squard? Well yes, because even if we assume he didn't change in 36 years we also have the fact that Squard was able to explain his motivation.
 
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#79
Can you give examples of 4 star, 3 star, 2 star, and 1 star segments/moments of the story?
As I said 2 and 1 star never happened for entire plot point butvery short moments. For ex, ⭐ ⭐ > Happened when Nami was aggressed by Absalom in the shower ⭐ > The representation of Queers in Kamabaka Queendom, but I'm softer on that now. ⭐⭐⭐ > Happened with PARTS (only parts) of F.Island when I was disagreeing with Oda's message. ⭐⭐⭐⭐ > Would less liked Arcs..

Can you give examples of 4 star, 3 star, 2 star, and 1 star segments/moments of the story?
Basically, One Piece for me is always between ⭐⭐⭐⭐ and ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ . There is almost nothing that is not "fun" for me in OP. I was reading it when I was 12 the same way that I read chapters now. Everything disappear and I'm a kid again. I hold very little expectations outside of the story and I'm letting myself be surprised by everything even when I have a major agenda, I don't get fazed.


Actually, yeah, this is very weird considering that Whitebeard got stabbed in the chest by Squard (who wasn't even turned into a demon by anyone, he was just gullible) and still went out of his way to forgive him and let him go, yet he gets hit by a suspiciously demonic looking Xebec once and suddenly all bets are off??
The Rocks crew was never Newgate's family. I don't know why you guyz are seeking a resistance from Whitebeard where there shouldn't be one. Whitebeard saw Xebec attack him, with the pattern of the crew and the fact that he probably never trusted him, he fought back and dipped, that's logical. You could question why he didn't question but as I said, character are human, not machine, they make errors.


Only those who don't understand the story would rate it anything lower.
Yup, that would be true a lot of times. BUt expectations and bad reading environment is also at play. Althought it is really funny to me that you guyz are treating God valley like an arc when in reality it was never teased like it and it's part of a flashback. Thus any kind of expectations related to a potential arc treatment has no value here. I mean look at that: >>


- Shakky plot. Stupid reason for the GV gathering. Should have been a treasure / huge DF or something special and not to rescue Shakky. A plot that was thankfully glossed over quick in the event. The Ray / Shakky thing wasn’t great at all either.

- The retcon about BM and Kaido life debt. BM looks stupid af with her life debt while Kaido just owned her lmao.

- The retcon of Kaido wanting to attack / fight Roger. No where in sight.

- the whole « fight » and clash was a mess. No real and clean fight panels, no hype etc. A bit of a shame considering the hype of the event. MF was quick yet we had some huge hype panel of monster fighting. It isn’t that difficult. Clash piece is really lame. Lot of guys should have had focus or at least one or two feats.

- the Imu fight was lame. Barely readable and the EPIXC double spread where everyone attacked was lame. There is also the problem of Garp attacking Saturn just like that no consequences lol.

- the DR reaction of the Yonko was straight up ridiculous. Everyone turned their brain off. Obviously Odas fault, but man it’s embarrassing this level of writing

- the last fight was a bit too quick and didn’t show enough but I guess for a flashback it was expected
When something meant to be funny (Big Mom and Kaido's debt) > and IS funny.. becomes disliked because it doesn't met the expectations of someone who for some reason wanted to see a lot of drama... then the problem is not the story, but the reading experience that is corrupted by the invention of headcanons. (and I'm not going over the entire list, it's everywhere for other reasons)

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Ya the God Valley plot of Shakky was Helen of troy stuff he copied straight up lol
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No.... I mean at this point, you guyz are completely compromising and corrupting your reading experience by either a bad environment, a missplaced edgyness, a bad analysis (like here, if you analyze an inspiration like this then you can literally trash on the entirety of Storytelling in existence), bad or illegitimate expectations, complete lack of understanding.. EVERYTHING will be trashed on no matter.



We got a glimpse of how trash the final war will be.
Well trust me that if you don't better your reading experience and stop saying or expecting BS, you will think it's trash. But if that's the case, the door is open, I suggest for you to quit now.

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