I couldn't "write" it better but I could do a better job than the editors though, by pointing out major issues and workshopping with Oda solutions.
Make Kanjuro's escape with Momo seem more plausible.
Tell Oda that the scooby do "lets split up" plan of Law/Kinemon/Denjiro is completely...
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