Chapter Discussion Chrollo vs Kurapika final battle

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#1
Chrollo vs Kurapika final battle
No limitations no audience pure 1 vs 1 to fulfill Kurapika's revenge.

How would you write it down?


ps. @Chrono I hope you will participate:cheers:
 
#2
Ok this is gonna be a long read. Strap yourselves in.

- There are already fan theories that Hisoka is the bodyguard that is in close proximity with Kurapika. So eventually Hisoka reveals himself to Kurapika and reveals that all the spiders are on the ship.
- He then asks Kurapika if he would want to go on a killing spree with him to kill all the spiders. Kurapika firstly hesistates because of Woble. But then complies after Bill promises that he and the other bodyguards will protect him.
- Hisoka has enlisted both Kurapika and Illumi's help on massacring the Spiders. Hisoka plans on fighting Chrollo, without him using the powers of the other Spiders. And the only way for that to happen is if other people also kill the spiders. He wanted to Illumi to get inside intel on their plan whilst Hisoka goes and asks Kurapika for help.




- Machi tells Chrollo that she has a bad feeling about Illumi and that she doesnt trust him. Chrollo also doesnt trust Illumi, so he asks Machi to dispose of him...if he is planning to betray them.
- Kurapika and Hisoka use Hisoka's texture suprise to go down the Ship...with a different disguise. They meet up with Illumi and Kalluto. With Kalluto being suprised with the plan. Hisoka tells Illumi to target Bonovoleo whilst Kurapika targets Shizuku. Then he tells them to work theor way downwards.
- Chrollo finding out this information, tells Machi to go after Illumi, whilst he tells Bono and Shizuku to stay put. However nevertheless they go and try to target Kurapika

- Machi and Illumi have their fight, and its extremely even. Machi cuts his arm ( the one Gon broke) off whilst Illumi impaled her through the abdomen ( like Killua attempted). Illumi eventually wins by combining his assassin training with his Ko. And taking her entire head off. Kalluto is very conflicted and doesnt know what to do.

- Whilst Kurapika fights both Bono and Shizuku. They prove to be very tough. However eventually Kurapika ends up binding both of them in Chain Jail. Kurapika after questioning Bono, kills him. However he finds out that Shizuku wasnt part of the Kurta clan massacre... so he lets her off.

- After finding out about Illumi's betrayal, Chrollo also phones the rest of the spiders about Hisoka's whereabouts after he told Machi. They all rush upwards, whilst Chrollo prepares his strategy for fighting Kurapika. Since he prepared for Hisoka, and even Illumi...in case of his betrayal. But he was suprised about Kurapika. And he sees him as the biggest threat to everyone.

(To be continued)......
 
#5
Ok this is gonna be a long read. Strap yourselves in.

- There are already fan theories that Hisoka is the bodyguard that is in close proximity with Kurapika. So eventually Hisoka reveals himself to Kurapika and reveals that all the spiders are on the ship.
- He then asks Kurapika if he would want to go on a killing spree with him to kill all the spiders. Kurapika firstly hesistates because of Woble. But then complies after Bill promises that he and the other bodyguards will protect him.
- Hisoka has enlisted both Kurapika and Illumi's help on massacring the Spiders. Hisoka plans on fighting Chrollo, without him using the powers of the other Spiders. And the only way for that to happen is if other people also kill the spiders. He wanted to Illumi to get inside intel on their plan whilst Hisoka goes and asks Kurapika for help.




- Machi tells Chrollo that she has a bad feeling about Illumi and that she doesnt trust him. Chrollo also doesnt trust Illumi, so he asks Machi to dispose of him...if he is planning to betray them.
- Kurapika and Hisoka use Hisoka's texture suprise to go down the Ship...with a different disguise. They meet up with Illumi and Kalluto. With Kalluto being suprised with the plan. Hisoka tells Illumi to target Bonovoleo whilst Kurapika targets Shizuku. Then he tells them to work theor way downwards.
- Chrollo finding out this information, tells Machi to go after Illumi, whilst he tells Bono and Shizuku to stay put. However nevertheless they go and try to target Kurapika

- Machi and Illumi have their fight, and its extremely even. Machi cuts his arm ( the one Gon broke) off whilst Illumi impaled her through the abdomen ( like Killua attempted). Illumi eventually wins by combining his assassin training with his Ko. And taking her entire head off. Kalluto is very conflicted and doesnt know what to do.

- Whilst Kurapika fights both Bono and Shizuku. They prove to be very tough. However eventually Kurapika ends up binding both of them in Chain Jail. Kurapika after questioning Bono, kills him. However he finds out that Shizuku wasnt part of the Kurta clan massacre... so he lets her off.

- After finding out about Illumi's betrayal, Chrollo also phones the rest of the spiders about Hisoka's whereabouts after he told Machi. They all rush upwards, whilst Chrollo prepares his strategy for fighting Kurapika. Since he prepared for Hisoka, and even Illumi...in case of his betrayal. But he was suprised about Kurapika. And he sees him as the biggest threat to everyone.

(To be continued)......
- Franklin, Phinks, Nobunaga and Feitan are confronted by Kurapika. Kurapika asks them all if they were inside the Kurta Clan masscare....in which they reply "yes". Kurapika then informs them he is the chain user that killed Uvogin. Theyre all suprised and shocked. Kurapika then prepares to kill all of them.

- Before he can do anything, Feitan appears and attacks him. Kurapika reacts and he fights him close combat. The rest of them join in, and dont give Kurapika the space to use Chain Jail. Feitan cuts off Kurapika's legs, Nobunaga slices his hand off, Franklin fills him up with bullets in his stomach and Phinks delivers a crushing blow to his side. Kurapika is defeated and is on the floor

- Feitan and Phinks order Nobunaga and Franklin to get Kurapika to Chrollo...whilst they go look for Hisoka and Illumi. They intend for Chrollo to steal Kurapika's power and for Machi to heal and tie him up. When they leave, Kurapika gets back up and he is completely healed. His eyes are red with anger.

-He reveals that healing chain is most effective in healing.....when healing wounds that are inflicted by Spiders. He says next time they should aim for the killing blow....instead of trying to torture him. Kurapika then engages Franklin and Nobunaga

- Elsewhere Kalluto is doubting his true affliction. He hates Illumi, because of everything Illumi has done to Killua. However he is also afraid of Illumi, so he secretly hopes the Spiders get rid of him. They pass by the corpse of a dead Bonovoleo.

- Suddenly a beaten up Shizuku comes behind Illumi, and attempts to kill him for betraying. However Kalluto swiftly decapitates her before she lands her blow. Kalluto is shocked and confused on how his body moved to protect Illumi, even though he wanted Illumi dead. Illumi then reveals that he impanted a needle within Kalluto's head that would force him into protecting Illumi at all costs. Kalluto crys in fear and anguish....and wants to get out of this nightmare.

- Back to Kurapika, he manages to defeat both Nobunaga and Franklin, holding them in chain jail. Before he can get to kill them, a half-dead Machi attacks Kurapika.....with the attack being sucessful and injuring Kurapika. Franklin and Nobunaga are free, and are joined by a half dead Machi. Apparently she stiched her wounds shut and didnt actually die to Illumi. They then all attack a confused Kurapika and manage to take him down

- Nobunaga strectches out his sword and prepares to kill Kurapika. Suddenly three wormholes appear beneath Machi, Franklin and Nobunaga. Out of those three holes comes out three chain jails. The three of them are confused and binded. Kurapika gets back up and it is showm that he is using Leorio's power. Flashback is shown of Kurapika going to meet Leorio, whilst Illumi and Hisoka met up. Kurapika explains his situation and asks for Leorio's hatsu. And then Leorio complies and lets him borrow it.

- Kurapika then goes to all three of them which are binded. He then puts a judgement chain in all of their hearts and kills them.

- Somewhere else, Illumi meets up with Hisoka again. They are both confronted by Feitan and Phinks. They prepare to square off.

(To be continued)........
 
#6
Ok this is gonna be a long read. Strap yourselves in.

- There are already fan theories that Hisoka is the bodyguard that is in close proximity with Kurapika. So eventually Hisoka reveals himself to Kurapika and reveals that all the spiders are on the ship.
- He then asks Kurapika if he would want to go on a killing spree with him to kill all the spiders. Kurapika firstly hesistates because of Woble. But then complies after Bill promises that he and the other bodyguards will protect him.
- Hisoka has enlisted both Kurapika and Illumi's help on massacring the Spiders. Hisoka plans on fighting Chrollo, without him using the powers of the other Spiders. And the only way for that to happen is if other people also kill the spiders. He wanted to Illumi to get inside intel on their plan whilst Hisoka goes and asks Kurapika for help.




- Machi tells Chrollo that she has a bad feeling about Illumi and that she doesnt trust him. Chrollo also doesnt trust Illumi, so he asks Machi to dispose of him...if he is planning to betray them.
- Kurapika and Hisoka use Hisoka's texture suprise to go down the Ship...with a different disguise. They meet up with Illumi and Kalluto. With Kalluto being suprised with the plan. Hisoka tells Illumi to target Bonovoleo whilst Kurapika targets Shizuku. Then he tells them to work theor way downwards.
- Chrollo finding out this information, tells Machi to go after Illumi, whilst he tells Bono and Shizuku to stay put. However nevertheless they go and try to target Kurapika

- Machi and Illumi have their fight, and its extremely even. Machi cuts his arm ( the one Gon broke) off whilst Illumi impaled her through the abdomen ( like Killua attempted). Illumi eventually wins by combining his assassin training with his Ko. And taking her entire head off. Kalluto is very conflicted and doesnt know what to do.

- Whilst Kurapika fights both Bono and Shizuku. They prove to be very tough. However eventually Kurapika ends up binding both of them in Chain Jail. Kurapika after questioning Bono, kills him. However he finds out that Shizuku wasnt part of the Kurta clan massacre... so he lets her off.

- After finding out about Illumi's betrayal, Chrollo also phones the rest of the spiders about Hisoka's whereabouts after he told Machi. They all rush upwards, whilst Chrollo prepares his strategy for fighting Kurapika. Since he prepared for Hisoka, and even Illumi...in case of his betrayal. But he was suprised about Kurapika. And he sees him as the biggest threat to everyone.

(To be continued)......
- Franklin, Phinks, Nobunaga and Feitan are confronted by Kurapika. Kurapika asks them all if they were inside the Kurta Clan masscare....in which they reply "yes". Kurapika then informs them he is the chain user that killed Uvogin. Theyre all suprised and shocked. Kurapika then prepares to kill all of them.

- Before he can do anything, Feitan appears and attacks him. Kurapika reacts and he fights him close combat. The rest of them join in, and dont give Kurapika the space to use Chain Jail. Feitan cuts off Kurapika's legs, Nobunaga slices his hand off, Franklin fills him up with bullets in his stomach and Phinks delivers a crushing blow to his side. Kurapika is defeated and is on the floor

- Feitan and Phinks order Nobunaga and Franklin to get Kurapika to Chrollo...whilst they go look for Hisoka and Illumi. They intend for Chrollo to steal Kurapika's power and for Machi to heal and tie him up. When they leave, Kurapika gets back up and he is completely healed. His eyes are red with anger.

-He reveals that healing chain is most effective in healing.....when healing wounds that are inflicted by Spiders. He says next time they should aim for the killing blow....instead of trying to torture him. Kurapika then engages Franklin and Nobunaga

- Elsewhere Kalluto is doubting his true affliction. He hates Illumi, because of everything Illumi has done to Killua. However he is also afraid of Illumi, so he secretly hopes the Spiders get rid of him. They pass by the corpse of a dead Bonovoleo.

- Suddenly a beaten up Shizuku comes behind Illumi, and attempts to kill him for betraying. However Kalluto swiftly decapitates her before she lands her blow. Kalluto is shocked and confused on how his body moved to protect Illumi, even though he wanted Illumi dead. Illumi then reveals that he impanted a needle within Kalluto's head that would force him into protecting Illumi at all costs. Kalluto crys in fear and anguish....and wants to get out of this nightmare.

- Back to Kurapika, he manages to defeat both Nobunaga and Franklin, holding them in chain jail. Before he can get to kill them, a half-dead Machi attacks Kurapika.....with the attack being sucessful and injuring Kurapika. Franklin and Nobunaga are free, and are joined by a half dead Machi. Apparently she stiched her wounds shut and didnt actually die to Illumi. They then all attack a confused Kurapika and manage to take him down

- Nobunaga strectches out his sword and prepares to kill Kurapika. Suddenly three wormholes appear beneath Machi, Franklin and Nobunaga. Out of those three holes comes out three chain jails. The three of them are confused and binded. Kurapika gets back up and it is showm that he is using Leorio's power. Flashback is shown of Kurapika going to meet Leorio, whilst Illumi and Hisoka met up. Kurapika explains his situation and asks for Leorio's hatsu. And then Leorio complies and lets him borrow it.

- Kurapika then goes to all three of them which are binded. He then puts a judgement chain in all of their hearts and kills them.

- Somewhere else, Illumi meets up with Hisoka again. They are both confronted by Feitan and Phinks. They prepare to square off.

(To be continued)........
Is this your version of HxH fanfic? Please continue (i havent read it though but it seems intense)
 
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Opening the thread by seeing the Chapter Discussion tag only to find itโ€™s a 1 vs 1 debate be like;

Btw Iโ€™ll now read the thread..!!
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Kurapika taking on 3 Spiders with Fietan and Nobunaga being two of them and having a healing chain and stuff is a bit too much IMo. At best he can take out 2 Spiders at a time with Fully activated Scarlet Eyes also Fietanโ€™s speed is no joke. The part of Bonolenov and Shizuku is like reading the spoilers. Lol
 
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#9
Opening the thread by seeing the Chapter Discussion tag only to find itโ€™s a 1 vs 1 debate be like;

Btw Iโ€™ll now read the thread..!!
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Kurapika taking on 3 Spiders with Fietan and Nobunaga being two of them and having a healing chain and stuff is a bit too much IMo. At best he can take out 2 Spiders at a time with Fully activated Scarlet Eyes also Fietanโ€™s speed is no joke. The part of Bonolenov and Shizuku is like reading the spoilers. Lol
This just my fanfic. I did make Kurapika lose that fight. And made sure that they could kill him if they wanted to. The only way Kurapika wouldve survived is by having them not kill him and instead subdue and give his powers to Chrollo. But yh Kurapika got stomped hard when he fought 4 of them.

Try reading my entire fanfic. Its acc pretty fun to write this lol.
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- Franklin, Phinks, Nobunaga and Feitan are confronted by Kurapika. Kurapika asks them all if they were inside the Kurta Clan masscare....in which they reply "yes". Kurapika then informs them he is the chain user that killed Uvogin. Theyre all suprised and shocked. Kurapika then prepares to kill all of them.

- Before he can do anything, Feitan appears and attacks him. Kurapika reacts and he fights him close combat. The rest of them join in, and dont give Kurapika the space to use Chain Jail. Feitan cuts off Kurapika's legs, Nobunaga slices his hand off, Franklin fills him up with bullets in his stomach and Phinks delivers a crushing blow to his side. Kurapika is defeated and is on the floor

- Feitan and Phinks order Nobunaga and Franklin to get Kurapika to Chrollo...whilst they go look for Hisoka and Illumi. They intend for Chrollo to steal Kurapika's power and for Machi to heal and tie him up. When they leave, Kurapika gets back up and he is completely healed. His eyes are red with anger.

-He reveals that healing chain is most effective in healing.....when healing wounds that are inflicted by Spiders. He says next time they should aim for the killing blow....instead of trying to torture him. Kurapika then engages Franklin and Nobunaga

- Elsewhere Kalluto is doubting his true affliction. He hates Illumi, because of everything Illumi has done to Killua. However he is also afraid of Illumi, so he secretly hopes the Spiders get rid of him. They pass by the corpse of a dead Bonovoleo.

- Suddenly a beaten up Shizuku comes behind Illumi, and attempts to kill him for betraying. However Kalluto swiftly decapitates her before she lands her blow. Kalluto is shocked and confused on how his body moved to protect Illumi, even though he wanted Illumi dead. Illumi then reveals that he impanted a needle within Kalluto's head that would force him into protecting Illumi at all costs. Kalluto crys in fear and anguish....and wants to get out of this nightmare.

- Back to Kurapika, he manages to defeat both Nobunaga and Franklin, holding them in chain jail. Before he can get to kill them, a half-dead Machi attacks Kurapika.....with the attack being sucessful and injuring Kurapika. Franklin and Nobunaga are free, and are joined by a half dead Machi. Apparently she stiched her wounds shut and didnt actually die to Illumi. They then all attack a confused Kurapika and manage to take him down

- Nobunaga strectches out his sword and prepares to kill Kurapika. Suddenly three wormholes appear beneath Machi, Franklin and Nobunaga. Out of those three holes comes out three chain jails. The three of them are confused and binded. Kurapika gets back up and it is showm that he is using Leorio's power. Flashback is shown of Kurapika going to meet Leorio, whilst Illumi and Hisoka met up. Kurapika explains his situation and asks for Leorio's hatsu. And then Leorio complies and lets him borrow it.

- Kurapika then goes to all three of them which are binded. He then puts a judgement chain in all of their hearts and kills them.

- Somewhere else, Illumi meets up with Hisoka again. They are both confronted by Feitan and Phinks. They prepare to square off.

(To be continued)........
Part 3

- Illumi is still missing his arm and informs Hisoka that he will expect a raise of money since now the mission is getting more and more deadlier. Kalluto is also frightened and wants to get out of the situation. Feitan asks Kalluto if he betrayed them. And Illumi answers him that Kalluto was a Zoldyck before he was ever a spider. Illumi tell Kalluto that this would get dangerous....so he tells him to leave. Kalluto runs away as fast as he can.

- Elsewhere, Succession War is nearing its end. Every Prince is dead, and Camila is captured. Halkeburg meets his untimely demise in a sad way. The only Princes left are, Benjamin, Tserriednich and Woble.

- Throughout this entire course, Tserriednich has been training on his hatsu. He has an Emitter Nen beast in which he controls with Manipulation


The abilities of this Nen beast allow it to eat away on the aura of the opposing person. Until it sucks away most of the aura, leaving the person weak and nearly dead. It then stores the aura and hatsu within itself, allowing it to be used by Tserriednich at anytime. It's said that such Nen beasts are born from people who are the worse of people. People who want death and destruction.

- Tserriednich carefully plants his Nen beast in Benjamins quaters. Quietly waiting as the beast sucks away at his brothers lifeforce. Within an hour, Benjamin will be near dead and can be easily assasinated.

- Whilst that is going on, Hisoka excitedly orgasms and says that hes been waiting to fight these 2 after Chrollo. Illumi figures out that he cant be playing around and needs to take things seriously. If he dies here, he will never have control over Killua and Alluka.

- Hisoka decides that he will face Feitan, whilst Illumi faces Phinks. Hisoka picks Feitan, as he wants to improve on his speed, and keeping up with the fastest in the troupe....will allow that. Feitan runs up on him and Hisoka clashes with his sword...by using his card. They then parry alot. Feitan makes sure to use Gyou at all times, in case of any Bungee Gum techniques. But he cant find any whilst fighting Hisoka. He makes sure to stay cautious of Hisoka, whilst Hisoka happily smiles

- Phinks, however angrily winds up his arm and is hoping to kill Illumi with one punch. Illumi realises that Phinks is putting all his nen within his fist, and using barely any defence. Illumi could implant his needles within Phinks, however he would need to aim for the back of his head. He uses an advanced version of rhythm echo. And then attacks Phinks who has winded his arm 8 times. However, Phinks is already prepared and plans to hit him the shadow behind him with a punch.

- Phinks turns around, and prepares to punch....but all he sees is a ringing needle. Illumi then appears behind him and attempts to decapitate him. If Phinks attacks the needle, Illumi kills him...if Phinks tries to counter Illumi, the needle gets him. Phinks however anticipates it and catches the needle with his normal hand and faces Illumi. The needle however pierces through his normal hand ( causing him slight pain) and Illumi manages to take a chunk of his neck off. However whilst Illumi is in mid air Phinks lands his hit right on Illumi's ribcage. And sends him flying. Illumi anticipated getting hit and used Ko on his chest. Illumi begins to be scoffing blood.

- Illumi has treated his missing arm, however the wounds are beginning to reopen. And he is already bleeding from his mouth. Illumi realises that Phinks has far better physical stats then him, even if Illumi is way more lethal with his assassin training. Illumi is however more skilled and calm then Phinks. Illumi would have to use his "special needles" on himself if he wants to stand a chance in this state., however to use it....he wont be able to use his hatsu for the rest of the day. Phinks however is pissed, as he fell for such a dumb trick. He realises that his enhcaner punches are perfect for the brute types. But he would need to have his defences up everywhere if he wants to fight Illumi. Illumi then begins to start implanting the special needles within himself. Phinks seeing that he is doing push ups on the floor. With each push up his body enhcances. They both prepare to kill the other.

- Elsewhere Hisoka is confused as to why Feitan has yet to use his Hatsu. Hisoka begins feeling bored with the fight and thinks to kill Feitan.

(To be continued)...

(Damn this is taking longer to write).
 
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This just my fanfic. I did make Kurapika lose that fight. And made sure that they could kill him if they wanted to. The only way Kurapika wouldve survived is by having them not kill him and instead subdue and give his powers to Chrollo. But yh Kurapika got stomped hard when he fought 4 of them.

Try reading my entire fanfic. Its acc pretty fun to write this lol.
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Part 3

- Illumi is still missing his arm and informs Hisoka that he will expect a raise of money since now the mission is getting more and more deadlier. Kalluto is also frightened and wants to get out of the situation. Feitan asks Kalluto if he betrayed them. And Illumi answers him that Kalluto was a Zoldyck before he was ever a spider. Illumi tell Kalluto that this would get dangerous....so he tells him to leave. Kalluto runs away as fast as he can.

- Elsewhere, Succession War is nearing its end. Every Prince is dead, and Camila is captured. Halkeburg meets his untimely demise in a sad way. The only Princes left are, Benjamin, Tserriednich and Woble.

- Throughout this entire course, Tserriednich has been training on his hatsu. He has an Emitter Nen beast in which he controls with Manipulation


The abilities of this Nen beast allow it to eat away on the aura of the opposing person. Until it sucks away most of the aura, leaving the person weak and nearly dead. It then stores the aura and hatsu within itself, allowing it to be used by Tserriednich at anytime. It's said that such Nen beasts are born from people who are the worse of people. People who want death and destruction.

- Tserriednich carefully plants his Nen beast in Benjamins quaters. Quietly waiting as the beast sucks away at his brothers lifeforce. Within an hour, Benjamin will be near dead and can be easily assasinated.

- Whilst that is going on, Hisoka excitedly orgasms and says that hes been waiting to fight these 2 after Chrollo. Illumi figures out that he cant be playing around and needs to take things seriously. If he dies here, he will never have control over Killua and Alluka.

- Hisoka decides that he will face Feitan, whilst Illumi faces Phinks. Hisoka picks Feitan, as he wants to improve on his speed, and keeping up with the fastest in the troupe....will allow that. Feitan runs up on him and Hisoka clashes with his sword...by using his card. They then parry alot. Feitan makes sure to use Gyou at all times, in case of any Bungee Gum techniques. But he cant find any whilst fighting Hisoka. He makes sure to stay cautious of Hisoka, whilst Hisoka happily smiles

- Phinks, however angrily winds up his arm and is hoping to kill Illumi with one punch. Illumi realises that Phinks is putting all his nen within his fist, and using barely any defence. Illumi could implant his needles within Phinks, however he would need to aim for the back of his head. He uses an advanced version of rhythm echo. And then attacks Phinks who has winded his arm 8 times. However, Phinks is already prepared and plans to hit him the shadow behind him with a punch.

- Phinks turns around, and prepares to punch....but all he sees is a ringing needle. Illumi then appears behind him and attempts to decapitate him. If Phinks attacks the needle, Illumi kills him...if Phinks tries to counter Illumi, the needle gets him. Phinks however anticipates it and catches the needle with his normal hand and faces Illumi. The needle however pierces through his normal hand ( causing him slight pain) and Illumi manages to take a chunk of his neck off. However whilst Illumi is in mid air Phinks lands his hit right on Illumi's ribcage. And sends him flying. Illumi anticipated getting hit and used Ko on his chest. Illumi begins to be scoffing blood.

- Illumi has treated his missing arm, however the wounds are beginning to reopen. And he is already bleeding from his mouth. Illumi realises that Phinks has far better physical stats then him, even if Illumi is way more lethal with his assassin training. Illumi is however more skilled and calm then Phinks. Illumi would have to use his "special needles" on himself if he wants to stand a chance in this state., however to use it....he wont be able to use his hatsu for the rest of the day. Phinks however is pissed, as he fell for such a dumb trick. He realises that his enhcaner punches are perfect for the brute types. But he would need to have his defences up everywhere if he wants to fight Illumi. Illumi then begins to start implanting the special needles within himself. Phinks seeing that he is doing push ups on the floor. With each push up his body enhcances. They both prepare to kill the other.

- Elsewhere Hisoka is confused as to why Feitan has yet to use his Hatsu. Hisoka begins feeling bored with the fight and thinks to kill Feitan.

(To be continued)...

(Damn this is taking longer to write).
This is unrelated to the thread, but are you interested in making fanfic? If so, is there a subforum here accomodating that kind of hobby?
 
#13
Good job, just a small nusiance: mind the core troupe should already know how Kurapika looks like thanks to Pakunoda shooting Feitan, Phinks, Nobunaga etc. with her "memory bullets" (and then die cause of the restriction Kurapika posed on her).
 
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