1Kgs.11:1-13 -
"Now King Solomon loved many foreign women (...) Therefore the LORD said to Solomon, "Since this has been your mind and you have not kept my covenant and my statutes which I have commanded you, I will surely tear the kingdom from you and will give it to your servant. Yet for the sake of David your father I will not do it in your days, but I will tear it out of the hand of your son."
What happened in th plot? Nothing. That speedrun gave no useful plot points... People know nothing about what to look for in pacing. . Remove this chapter nothing changes..
But it's not really archery, it's more something specific to this new ability being introduced to use arrows for directional attacking as well as general offence and defence.
The pacing is good but I expected more from Harald's story
"He fell in love and changed" is the most basic way to write his character
He was an absolute asshole, so I expected something more complicated and new
The pacing is good but I expected more from Harald's story
"He fell in love and changed" is the most basic way to write his character
He was an absolute asshole, so I expected something more complicated and new
I think the angle is more: he was an asshole who never was told no. And now that someone is holding him accountable, he respects them annd loves them for it and wants to live up to their expectations of who he could be instead of who he is.
It’s not just he fell in love with a pacifist, he was humbled by her spirit.
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