Poem

[Rayleigh-Sama]

,just written a poem:
please post ur views on this or suggest me what I should improve on


TITLE: She a Shilouette

Every dream I see her as a Shilouette
anxiety when you in mad love with someone you dont even know yet

Dreaming her to be kind, loving and just my type
Was that really a dream or just a fantasy

If only I knew who she is,
if only I knew her face
if only I knew whether she exists or just my imagination

She a little shorter, a lil hotter & lil better than me
she just a Shilouette but whole attraction of dream for me

Broke me cant even gift her flowers
Broke me cant even take her to tours
Broke me can only afford long night walks
sadly she too far to meet me for a walk
after all difference of dream and reality cant be erased

wish I could erase it
meet her in reality
know her in reality

Wanna know whether she sees me the way I do
wanna know whether she dreams me as I do
wanna know whether she knows me
wanna know whether she the same as I imagine her to be

Wanna know if I was worthy enough to describe
wanna know if she is worthy enough of description
wanna know if she fits the Shilouette
wanna know if the Shilouette fits her
wanna know if she wanna know me

Wondering and Wandering around
Listening to same beats and sounds
writing the same sentences about the shiloutte
not just any but she a Shilouette

-@riiishabb_ (insta)

 

[Finalbeta]

Amazing job mate 🧐

 

[Rayleigh-Sama]

Amazing job mate 🧐

Thanks mate

 

[Finalbeta]

Thanks mate

 

[Rayleigh-Sama]

this is the only emoji that can represent what I feel

 

[BleakAsh]

@Rayleigh-Sama you sure it wasn't Finalbeta Twerking at We-Are

THAT is a very compelling poem right there

 

[Rayleigh-Sama]

@Rayleigh-Sama you sure it wasn't Finalbeta Tweaking at We-Are

THAT is a very compelling poem right there

Thank you so much mann

 

[Finalbeta]

this is the only emoji that can represent what I feel