> we see a little jab between Burgess and Shiryu, Burgess tells Shiryu not to get too full of himself because he was only "recruited" after Impel Down
peak writing
Funnily enough that was the one part someone (rightfully) criticized me for back when posted them
Someone mentioned that Shiryuu would not care what others think, and therefore not really have this Zoro-Sanji jab thing with Burgess (especially also about their bounties, similar to Zoro calling Sanji Number 4). And I guess that's true, Shiryuu would probably not care too much.
But having such a little exchange between them seemed cool, so I put that in. Glad you liked it.