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I must said it, it was really nice to read and really really good for a fanficition story about one piece.
the best thing about one piece is

Oda is always do better than any possible fan fictions ...

so I do expect both lore of the Rock War and Shanks meeting be MUCH bigger

but still ... really really enjoyable

but he was right ... Roger Pirate + Marine were not enough to win ... let alone just two of them
 
The plot twist about Emerald City was really a great choice.
ya I like that as well

cause maybe people didn't notice ... but Roger was going there ON HIS OWN ... there was no plan about

"OK ... Rock is going there , so call Roger so we can cut him"

no ..

Rock was there for a reason
Roger was there for a reason
Celestial dragons were there for a reason
 

Finalbeta

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The story was amazing but not flawless, I do not think that Whitebeard's defection alone would have been enough to give the victory over the Rocks or that Kaido should have been one of Xebec's four strongest subordinates and Dragon should have arrived later.
I can't wait to discover the story about the Rocks Pirates in detail

Expecially concerning Kaido and BM
 
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Arlong Arc
Arlong = East Blue Boss 2 (80%)

Alabasta Arc
Crocodile = Vet 4 (80%)
Mr. 1 = Pre-Vet 3 (80%)
Mr. 2 = Pre-Vet 4 (80%)

Skypiea Arc
Eneru = Vet 4 (90%)
Ohm = Pre-Vet 2 (80%)
Shura = Pre-Vet 3 (90%)
Satori = Pre-Vet 4 (90%)

Enies Lobby Arc
Zoan Lucci = Vet 3 (10%)
Zoan Kaku = Vet 4 (20%)
Zoan Jabra = Vet 4 (10%)

Thriller Bark Arc
Moria = Vet 3 (20%)
Absalom = Pre-Vet 2 (90%)
Ryuma = Pre-Vet 1 (90%)
 
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