It was overall a great fan project, Artur and his friends do a really good job. But I have some point overall who I didn't like and how Artur could do it better:
-Gorosei easily get take out by Dragon even though they get hyped up before by beating up his commanders, also the power of the Gorosei was kinda underwhelmed, I mean Antic Zoan T rex? These guys should easily have Mythic Zoans and not "just" Antic.
-Greenbull and Fujitora should get more focus as similar to the canon manga, they kinda use uninteresting Cp0 members for matches.
-Even though it was nice to see the abilities of each commander of Dragon, their enemy beeing kinda lame, no one really need Kaku and the others, no one really even want it. They should just make Fujitora+Greenbull vs 3 Commanders and Sabo vs Lucci, not more.
Overall these are the only "negative" points about this fan manga. Overall it was still great/amazing.