Controversial If You Could Rewrite any arc?

[Yoho]

If you had the opportunity to rewrite any arc in one piece which would it be?

What would you change?

Would you remove anything

Would you add anything?

Would you change out any characters?


For me I'll rewrite Egghead it was nearly #2 on my favorite arcs list but what started has a phenomenonal arc eventually fell down to barely top 10

Firstly I wouldnt have off screened them figuring out it's York the mystery aspect is why I was enjoying in fact I think it would of been even better if the reader didn't know who it was either we where figuring it out along side the crew could of been months of theories and discussions on who it could be

Secondly I think we should of met the Holy Knights before we officially got introduced to the gorosei and their abilities Saturn can stay his ties to Bonney and Kuma fits in well with the egghead theme and story but a think a few of the Holy Knights showing up would of been better than all the gorosei it would still habe the same affect of we can't hurt them so we need to run and it can still have the emeth vp message thing

Another thing the Vps should of stayed dead, even Stella has a cloned body waiting

Which was the point of killing them if they had back ups anyway? Did Kizaru know about these back ups and that's why he was so willing to go through with murdering his so called friend?

Yeah the dead should stay dead imo

I also would of given at least one strawhat a power up

Usopp and new sniper, upgraded Frankie's arsenal

Give Nami a bubble gun to use permanently

Something that she could use to fight other than Zeus, imagine if Nami had the bubble gun


And that's how I'd rewrite Egghead

 

[BoaHancocksHusband]

For Dressrosa, I'd make it less bloated and more focused on the Doffy family, cut down the Coliseum fighters t like 11-12 outside of Luffy so 13 total. Still a sizable amount to have a tournament but not a shitfest with so many mooky ahhh irrelevant characters

 

[Yoho]

For Dressrosa, I'd make it less bloated and more focused on the Doffy family, cut down the Coliseum fighters t like 11-12 outside of Luffy so 13 total. Still a sizable amount to have a tournament but not a shitfest with so many mooky ahhh irrelevant characters

Mooky ahh🤣🤣🤣

 

[Yoho]

For Dressrosa, I'd make it less bloated and more focused on the Doffy family, cut down the Coliseum fighters t like 11-12 outside of Luffy so 13 total. Still a sizable amount to have a tournament but not a shitfest with so many mooky ahhh irrelevant characters

Mooky ahh🤣🤣🤣

 

[BoaHancocksHusband]

Mooky ahh🤣🤣🤣

lol

 

[Warchief Sanji D Goat]

Fishman Island: No Sanji nosebleed. Everything else was fine.

Dressrosa: Stop running you dumbfucks.

Whole Cake Island: Stop screaming "WEDDDINGG CAKEEEE!!!!" Lol.

Wano: Kill all the Scabbards except Denjiro.

Egghead: Vegapunk please just die. And give Franky the photon gloves and Usopp a bubble gun.

 

[Kōri no kokyū]

Wano : Give me Black Blade lore , Let people know he's a shimotsuki. It's a samurai Centric Arc. Let him have some attention

 

[Yoho]

Wano : Give me Black Blade lore , Let people know he's a shimotsuki. It's a samurai Centric Arc. Let him have some attention

Agreed when it comes to lore, surrounding shimotsuki and the samurai wano was lacking

 

[Warchief Sanji D Goat]

Wano : Give me Black Blade lore , Let people know he's a shimotsuki. It's a samurai Centric Arc. Let him have some attention

Agreed when it comes to lore, surrounding shimotsuki and the samurai wano was lacking

 

[Kōri no kokyū]

I wank Zori blud.
Not One Piece.

 

[Monster Zoro's Tesla Supplier]

Even though he got a lot of this shit wrong the fact he predicted Shanks coming around the time of chapter 1053 is hilarious

 

[NAMELESS]

If you had the opportunity to rewrite any arc in one piece which would it be?

What would you change?

Would you remove anything

Would you add anything?

Would you change out any characters?


For me I'll rewrite Egghead it was nearly #2 on my favorite arcs list but what started has a phenomenonal arc eventually fell down to barely top 10

Firstly I wouldnt have off screened them figuring out it's York the mystery aspect is why I was enjoying in fact I think it would of been even better if the reader didn't know who it was either we where figuring it out along side the crew could of been months of theories and discussions on who it could be

Secondly I think we should of met the Holy Knights before we officially got introduced to the gorosei and their abilities Saturn can stay his ties to Bonney and Kuma fits in well with the egghead theme and story but a think a few of the Holy Knights showing up would of been better than all the gorosei it would still habe the same affect of we can't hurt them so we need to run and it can still have the emeth vp message thing

Another thing the Vps should of stayed dead, even Stella has a cloned body waiting

Which was the point of killing them if they had back ups anyway? Did Kizaru know about these back ups and that's why he was so willing to go through with murdering his so called friend?

Yeah the dead should stay dead imo

I also would of given at least one strawhat a power up

Usopp and new sniper, upgraded Frankie's arsenal

Give Nami a bubble gun to use permanently

Something that she could use to fight other than Zeus, imagine if Nami had the bubble gun


And that's how I'd rewrite Egghead

I would give a lot less focus on side characters on Dressrosa and WCI.

 

[Warchief Sanji D Goat]

I wank Zori blud.
Not One Piece.

Without OP, Zoro wouldn't exist.

 

[zzShinichi]

I'd remove Yamato completely and replace Yamato with Zoro after getting the vaccine

 

[Kōri no kokyū]

Without OP, Zoro wouldn't exist.

Without Zori OP wouldn't exist.

 

[NicoRobinIsQueen]

Egghead

I liked it, BUT I would like some things to change
1. Have the GOAT Kaku fight someone like Brook or chopper, we need Brook to fight someone and kaku would be the perfect opponent
2. Have the vice admirals shine more, give doll a fight between Nami at least or chppper or someone
3. Seraphim, give luffy a seraphim, like s snake and s hawk or something as his babies to mentor, Roger had shanks and buggy, rocks had kaido, kaido had ulti and page 1, whitebeard had Marco+entire crew and ace

 

[DonWick]

Egghead: I’d delete Vegapunks speech and make Kizaru actually fight Luffy without running around.

Wano: Zoro would have gotten the sword Luffy had. Queen wouldn’t be a character. Smoothie and the other big mom pirates would actually have a role.

WCI: Sanji would have poisoned the cake.

Dresrossa: I’m deleting the countdown.

 

[BoaHancocksHusband]

Fishman Island: No Sanji nosebleed. Everything else was fine.

Dressrosa: Stop running you dumbfucks.

Whole Cake Island: Stop screaming "WEDDDINGG CAKEEEE!!!!" Lol.

Wano: Kill all the Scabbards except Denjiro.

Egghead: Vegapunk please just die. And give Franky the photon gloves and Usopp a bubble gun.

Only scabbard i cared abut was ASHURA DOUJI

Pure aura
hurt Jack

 

[NicoRobinIsQueen]

Fishman Island: No Sanji nosebleed. Everything else was fine.

Dressrosa: Stop running you dumbfucks.

Whole Cake Island: Stop screaming "WEDDDINGG CAKEEEE!!!!" Lol.

Wano: Kill all the Scabbards except Denjiro.

Egghead: Vegapunk please just die. And give Franky the photon gloves and Usopp a bubble gun.

Izou slander shall NOT be tolerated

 

[MonsterKaido]

Wano arc and Kaido's character as a whole.

Make him a far better villain and character and gave him good back story.

Give him awakening.

Wano as a whole needs to be rewritten imo. Meh pacing , too many useless irrelevant character. Orochi was not needed. Kaido should have gotten his back story and so on.