Im sick of one piece so I'm creating a my own comic.

#59
Let us see the work in progress :myman:
ive had the opening page in mind for awhile now.

panel 1: a visual repersentaion of an atom made by the probability field of an atom
dialogue: life is about rythmn.

Panel 2: a sun being slowly devoured by a black hole
dialogue: sound does not exist everywhere so we can't be sure what everything is dancing to.

panel 3: two galaxies spiraling off in the distance
dialogue: but we know everything moves!

panel 4: a boy is hunched over looking at a hurt lion cub twitching in the sand.

panel 5 A male lion looks at a distance at the two.
dialogue: do they move with intent?

panel 6: the lion steps into frame with the boy.
dialogue: or do they just follow the rules/laws of nature

final panel : A woman in a dress dancing and moving her hips back a forth teaching her kids to dance.

her hips will move in a pattern similar to how the atom moved ( not sure abput a narration box innthe last panel)

the next page will be about the main character most likely named abajil.
 

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#60
ive had the opening page in mind for awhile now.

panel 1: a visual repersentaion of an atom made by the probability field of an atom
dialogue: life is about rythmn.

Panel 2: a sun being slowly devoured by a black hole
dialogue: sound does not exist everywhere so we can't be sure what everything is dancing to.

panel 3: two galaxies spiraling off in the distance
dialogue: but we know everything moves!

panel 4: a boy is hunched over looking at a hurt lion cub twitching in the sand.

panel 5 A male lion looks at a distance at the two.
dialogue: do they move with intent?

panel 6: the lion steps into frame with the boy.
dialogue: or do they just follow the rules/laws of nature

final panel : A woman in a dress dancing and moving her hips back a forth teaching her kids to dance.

her hips will move in a pattern similar to how the atom moved ( not sure abput a narration box innthe last panel)

the next page will be about the main character most likely named abajil.
Sounds intriguing. I'm confident you will do pretty well. :cheers:
 
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