Im sick of one piece so I'm creating a my own comic.
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The hips part got me hard. Well damn written 
wait till I explain the powers in the story, its set in the future so of course you'll have lasers, robotic hmi enhancements etc but maybe the ryhtmn will play a more mystical part in the the fights.
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The hips part got me hard. Well damn written
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i just reached out to an old friend to help me draw this comic but I think I should write out a coherent first chapter before I decide on an art style and character design.
no, the most main character will be a girl and shes like 11. i figure 20-35 chapters of her growing up with some nice fight scenes and more geared towards pg13 than when she's 18 it becomes more seninen in nature.
abagail is in a hijab seen talking to two other girls. we then see her walking home thinking about about her conversation with her mother she had earlier in the morning.
long story short a voice in her head says to run away and never go home... longer story short her mother gets her head cut off. and we see her father walking down the street with her mothers head in hand.
still thinking about how im going to write these two pages. started drawing the comic
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Thanks me too lol
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no, the most main character will be a girl and shes like 11. i figure 20-35 chapters of her growing up with some nice fight scenes and more geared towards pg13 than when she's 18 it becomes more seninen in nature.
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abagail is in a hijab seen talking to two other girls. we then see her walking home thinking about about her conversation with her mother she had earlier in the morning.
long story short a voice in her head says to run away and never go home... longer story short her mother gets her head cut off. and we see her father walking down the street with her mothers head in hand.
still thinking about how im going to write these two pages. started drawing the comic
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Thanks me too lol
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That's a very bad way to start it.
Things such as the origin of the universe in fictional stories should only be described much later, when the readers are already attached to the main characters and the world they are in, so the readers have a reason to care about the lore of the fictional world.
Also, starting the story with existentialist questions will just scare the readers instead of attracting them.
I highly recommend starting the story with direct simple human interactions, so the readers can relate, instead of writing about things totally detatched from sensible reality, such as atoms, galaxies, etc.
What you wrote there sounds offensive to God and Christians, by the way.
It seems a lot like you're writing a story to make materialist propaganda.
Things such as the origin of the universe in fictional stories should only be described much later, when the readers are already attached to the main characters and the world they are in, so the readers have a reason to care about the lore of the fictional world.
Also, starting the story with existentialist questions will just scare the readers instead of attracting them.
I highly recommend starting the story with direct simple human interactions, so the readers can relate, instead of writing about things totally detatched from sensible reality, such as atoms, galaxies, etc.
What you wrote there sounds offensive to God and Christians, by the way.
It seems a lot like you're writing a story to make materialist propaganda.
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