General & Others Oda’s failure : execution

[Patapujuro]

I mean, actually showing the characters doing stuff that isn’t stupidly obvious or braindead would really help.

Big Meme MUHH intel network can’t figure out where tf Jinbe is, no one has a single fucking clue that Capone has been plotting against her for months. Somehow no one but Bobbin realises that Sanji has escaped, despite Sanji having been standing outside Pudding’s SENTIENT TALKING DOOR only seconds ago, no one thinks to warn Pudding not to mouth off at Reiju while he might be in earshot. Jesus Christ, what in the fuck are these info gatherers doing? Jacking each other off in the corner no doubt.

Want to write a villain as the king of 1v1, the strongest creature on land, sea and sky? Maybe show him actually winning a fight against a proper contender without A) bitching out B) cheap shotting or generally getting his teeth kicked in might help. He’s getting knocked around by fucking base Luffy now, god damn that’s embarrassing

I love how you gave concrete examples of Oda messing up hype elements he established himself and none of his apologists dares to refute your points

 

[Charlotte Sky]

I guess it would be better executed if the alliance lost, had half the crew dead then another time skip where in each chapter we see Luffy and Zoro training then they go against Kaido and Big Mom again but they inevitably are defeated again because they are Yonkou. Then after some more hundreds of training chapters Luffy can finally take on Kaido but he actually has already died of old age so Luffy can move on.

Troll.

 

[Jew D. Boy]

You LITERALLY said, "who knows" so now you are resorting to lying? You first committed a straw man and now you are resorting to lying? You are obviously trolling, I am done here. Deuces!

Dude you need to chill out. It's not that serious.

 

[Herrera95]

Exactly! He lives on hype! New World is only hype. Wano hype, chapter 1000 hype. Laugh Tale hype, Final War hype. But still everybody keep saying pre timeskip is better than now.

 

[Sword God Ryuma]

Yeah I guarantee you when Onigashima is going to fall there will be ZERO deaths, Oda doesn't have the balls to kill off random characters, even from the burned okobore town somehow someway everyone will make it alive

Then why Pedro dead?

 

[Jailer]

Then why Pedro dead?

Sulong Pedro is coming in soon

 

[Warchief Sanji D Goat]

Sulong Pedro is coming in soon

Can't wait.

 

[Herrera95]

Sulong Pedro is coming in soon

I lost a bit credibility on that when Nekomamushi heard of his death and is now heading to Perospero.

 

[Jailer]

I lost a bit credibility on that when Nekomamushi heard of his death and is now heading to Perospero.

Peros didn't even do anything, he actually told Pedro to stop doing that