General & Others Oda Isn’t a Good Writer According to Pixar

#1
Pixar has 22 rules of writing which they believe is necessary when they write their scripts and Oda breaks almost every rule lmfao:
  1. You admire a character for trying more than for their successes.
  2. Keep in mind what’s interesting to you as an audience, not what’s fun to do as a writer. They can be very different.
  3. Trying for theme is important, however you won’t see what the story is actually about until you’re at the end of that story. Now rewrite.
  4. Once upon a time there was ___. Every day, ___. One day ___. Because of that, ___. Because of that, ___. Until finally ___.
  5. Simplify. Focus. Combine characters. Hop over detours. You’ll feel like you’re losing valuable stuff but it sets you free.
  6. What is your character good at, comfortable with? Throw the polar opposite at them. Challenge them. How do they deal?
  7. Come up with your ending before you figure out your middle. Seriously. Endings are hard, get yours working up front.
  8. Finish your story, let go even if it’s not perfect. In an ideal world you have both, but move on. Do better next time.
  9. When you’re stuck, make a list of what WOULDN’T happen next. Lots of times the material to get you unstuck will show up.
  10. Pull apart the stories you like. What you like in them is a part of you; you’ve got to recognize it before you can use it.
  11. Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a perfect idea, you’ll never share it with anyone.
  12. Discount the 1st thing that comes to mind. And the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, 5th – get the obvious out of the way. Surprise yourself.
  13. Give your characters opinions. Passive/malleable might seem likable to you as you write, but it’s poison to the audience.
  14. Why must you tell THIS story? What’s the belief burning within you that your story feeds off of? That’s the heart of it.
  15. If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty lends credibility to unbelievable situations.
  16. What are the stakes? Give us reason to root for the character. What happens if they don’t succeed? Stack the odds against.
  17. No work is ever wasted. If it’s not working, let go and move on – it’ll come back around to be useful later.
  18. You have to know yourself: the difference between doing your best & fussing. Story is testing, not refining.
  19. Coincidences to get characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it are cheating.
  20. Exercise: take the building blocks of a movie you dislike. How d’you rearrange them into what you DO like?
  21. You gotta identify with your situation/characters, can’t just write ‘cool’. What would make YOU act that way?
  22. What’s the essence of your story? Most economical telling of it? If you know that, you can build out from there.
 
#8
Omg if yall don't have anything productive to say then get the fuck off my thread. What kind of comments are these? Childish comments. I post a thread about the rules of storying telling, hoping to get some intelligent debate about it and here we have the fanboys uniting getting sensitive.
Oda objectively created a better story than Pixar ever did, so we have no reason to trust their writing rules if they're inferior writers than Oda.
 
#9
In an arc dedicated to an army of zoan users, and most likely the one arc that will focus on zoan users the most in the whole series..
Let's add a character that can turn enemy zoan users into allies!

Great idea.
One of the biggest flaws of Wano. Makes the whole punk hazard smiles plot like completely pointless. As Pixar noted, it’s cheating. Lol
 
#12
How about this? I will put you on my ignore list. You fanboys are in a cult. So the whole 22 rules list Oda doesn’t break? He is perfect? Lmfao! Take this ignore dude.
You said you wanted counterarguments, and as soon as you get them you put me on the ignore list, fair enough. No writer is perfect and writers do have different styles, the same rules don't apply to everyone.
 
#14
If you were your character, in this situation, how would you feel? Honesty lends credibility to unbelievable situations.
Queen: In a situation where our headquarter is being invaded by a large forces that already outsmarted me in previous act, and it seems our crew will face the biggest war ever.
What should I do? Oh let's attack my subordinates so they will change side and support the enemies!!

Several chapters later...
King: Let me follow that too.


Sanji: In a seemingly impossible battle against not one but two yonkos, 1 yonko that was enough to fail Bege's assasination plot just by screaming, and enough to make my crew all running away, with a sacrifice..
What should I do? Prostitutes!!!
 
#19
Odas writing has probably declined imo due to his bloating story
I think post-Wano it will improve dramatically,remember OP was about Luffy taking on the Yonko to find the One Piece!But Oda kept having ideas and things became too big,the original OP plot we will see right now!
Oden and Roger's flashback was really fucking good,if you didn't get the feeling we accomplished something by reading this you don't really like OP!
 
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