I had a friend that is quite fluent in Japanese look at the Japanese scan of the chapter. (He has no axe to grind about the OP-verse. He doesn’t even like OP.) He gave me essentially the same tranlation/interpretation of Raleigh’s dialog that was given by TCB scans. As an aside, he also remarked that you cannot set terms in negotiation/mediation from a position of weakness, in line with the art panels and the TCB scan translation. The WSJ’s English localization is flawed and inaccurate.