No. For a reason:
1. I agree on this one. Altough dream is not the right term, desire is more appropriate. Indeed some characters may have strong desire but never says the word "dream" or "goal". What they say is "I want"
2. This one we don't quite agree. For a simple reason: The past is just a tool to explain the story in the simplest way. Nothing tells us in the story that what the strawhat have experienced can't be done in the present of the story. That's why I used the system of Desire and need.
BUT
I can accept to add the pillar "Lived a Tragedy" this actually don't refer to the past and can be applied to the present of the story.
3. The special talent is to vague. The talent of the strawhats is always related to a post and a thematic in the story. That's why the term "post" for a pillar is more appropriated.
Like I said previously, you can't put "Luffy liking you (and the term is too vague)" at the top, too many character have this parameters, it would simply render the parameter meaningless. Its important, but not as much as a post.
No he can't. You can't just "invent" a post for a character. A post and a skill is something that is prepared YEARS in advance and is related to the nature, characterization and thematic of the character. This is why its absolutely necessary that it goes on top.
Your % system is not that bad, I actually like it.
Ok I'll change the Pillar in fonction and add those we talked about. Which are "The tragedy" and "the double link" (A link Character to Luffy and Luffy to character)
I will also get rid of the fighting skill pillars. After consideration, all the character with one exception (vegapunk) have a capacity for battle, render this parameter useless.
1. I agree on this one. Altough dream is not the right term, desire is more appropriate. Indeed some characters may have strong desire but never says the word "dream" or "goal". What they say is "I want"
2. This one we don't quite agree. For a simple reason: The past is just a tool to explain the story in the simplest way. Nothing tells us in the story that what the strawhat have experienced can't be done in the present of the story. That's why I used the system of Desire and need.
BUT
I can accept to add the pillar "Lived a Tragedy" this actually don't refer to the past and can be applied to the present of the story.
3. The special talent is to vague. The talent of the strawhats is always related to a post and a thematic in the story. That's why the term "post" for a pillar is more appropriated.
Like I said previously, you can't put "Luffy liking you (and the term is too vague)" at the top, too many character have this parameters, it would simply render the parameter meaningless. Its important, but not as much as a post.
No he can't. You can't just "invent" a post for a character. A post and a skill is something that is prepared YEARS in advance and is related to the nature, characterization and thematic of the character. This is why its absolutely necessary that it goes on top.
Your % system is not that bad, I actually like it.
Ok I'll change the Pillar in fonction and add those we talked about. Which are "The tragedy" and "the double link" (A link Character to Luffy and Luffy to character)
I will also get rid of the fighting skill pillars. After consideration, all the character with one exception (vegapunk) have a capacity for battle, render this parameter useless.
