Okay so in this thread you can discuss the things you didn't like and how you would change it to make the story better but you can't make a big change just give your opinion on other ways Oda could have chosen to develope a certain plot that would have been better for example you can't say i would let Ace live but you can change the way he died
I start with Bigmom's amnesia i think it was unnecessary and added nothing to the story you could have had her wake up on the beach and go to onigashima by herself or get captured and put in sea stone when she was unconsious
I would have Kidd attack the prison to save Killer instead of him getting caught by fodders that he should have been able to knock out with coc
I would shorten Udon it was a very boring time and instead of Luffy learning advcoa fighting fodders i would have him learn it by fighting Queen but no one would win Queen uses plague on him and tells him to join Luffy refuses and then Queen leaves him to die and goes to onigashima after that we can have Raizo, and Kawamatsu save him and take over the prison alongside Kidd and Killer.
I start with Bigmom's amnesia i think it was unnecessary and added nothing to the story you could have had her wake up on the beach and go to onigashima by herself or get captured and put in sea stone when she was unconsious
I would have Kidd attack the prison to save Killer instead of him getting caught by fodders that he should have been able to knock out with coc
I would shorten Udon it was a very boring time and instead of Luffy learning advcoa fighting fodders i would have him learn it by fighting Queen but no one would win Queen uses plague on him and tells him to join Luffy refuses and then Queen leaves him to die and goes to onigashima after that we can have Raizo, and Kawamatsu save him and take over the prison alongside Kidd and Killer.
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