- Don't let your hatred of Sanji to cloud your writing. Bring back Mr. Prince and stop using him as a gag and hype tool. (Gags are good in fights though)
- Give every SH individual fights like you used to do. Luffy is a great character, but everyone in the crew needs to increase their skills, for which the greatest method is fighting.
- Further elaborate upon Sanji's fire powers. They are clearly not just friction or fire of love stuff. Are they generated due to incomplete exoskeleton? Are Sanji's genetic modifications somehow awakened in later years? Can Sanji's genes be re-modified through surgery to completely remove the effects of Sora's drug? Answer the important questions.
- Focus more on crews of other supernovas. Only other crew we got a sort of proper introduction to was Bege's crew. How come these crews are rivals to SHPs? They seem way too weak and way too unimportant for any kind of competition with Straw Hats
- Add more personal dimensions to Straw Hats. Stop showing Zoro as a brutal fight machine with no sense of direction only. They had their personal moments before timeskip, now they seem just like stereotypical characters from a crude story. The only Straw Hat you have added more dimension to his personality was Sanji (and even then you used every single chance to bash him post-TS). Place equal importance to all of them, this is not just a fight all/conquer all manga.
- Give every SH individual fights like you used to do. Luffy is a great character, but everyone in the crew needs to increase their skills, for which the greatest method is fighting.
- Further elaborate upon Sanji's fire powers. They are clearly not just friction or fire of love stuff. Are they generated due to incomplete exoskeleton? Are Sanji's genetic modifications somehow awakened in later years? Can Sanji's genes be re-modified through surgery to completely remove the effects of Sora's drug? Answer the important questions.
- Focus more on crews of other supernovas. Only other crew we got a sort of proper introduction to was Bege's crew. How come these crews are rivals to SHPs? They seem way too weak and way too unimportant for any kind of competition with Straw Hats
- Add more personal dimensions to Straw Hats. Stop showing Zoro as a brutal fight machine with no sense of direction only. They had their personal moments before timeskip, now they seem just like stereotypical characters from a crude story. The only Straw Hat you have added more dimension to his personality was Sanji (and even then you used every single chance to bash him post-TS). Place equal importance to all of them, this is not just a fight all/conquer all manga.