My First YouTube Video : Please check it out

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Welkin

Welkin

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ShishioIsBack said:
How did you like it?
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Appreciate it my boiii
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It was definitely well done

As other people have said maybe start working on thumbnails and getting a OP style background (if you care about that)

Maybe set up a bit of a script beforehand (if you wanna be more professional but I’m assuming this is for fun) unless you wanna freestyle it

Good start though
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Oh and better editing* but that will come with time
 
ShishioIsBack

ShishioIsBack

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#23
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Welkin said:
It was definitely well done

As other people have said maybe start working on thumbnails and getting a OP style background (if you care about that)

Maybe set up a bit of a script beforehand (if you wanna be more professional but I’m assuming this is for fun) unless you wanna freestyle it

Good start though
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Oh and better editing* but that will come with time
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OP style background like?
You mean my channel banner?

Or like behind me in the video?

Also yeah I will do better editing next time.

Literally I discussed making YouTube channel on discord last morning and did it in the night.
My very first time ever video editing.

But most importantly is video entertaining or nah?
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Mr. Reloaded said:
Loved it! :finally:

Gave it a like :cheers:
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Thank you my brudda
 
Charlotte Horchata

Charlotte Horchata

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#24
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ShishioIsBack said:
I mean I am focusing on comedy but sure you can give me honest feedback.
Preferably in the comment section of the video lol
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I'm not commenting on the video.

Some quick feedback:

—You need better quality of both video and audio. Right now it is unbearable to follow.

—You're clearly overacting since you aren't comfortable with recording. It's okay, most amateurs make this mistake: too much body movement (can't keep your own position regarding the camera), unnatural kinesics, etc. Don't overdo it and your true personality will flow naturally once you take more practice.

—Poor usage of paralanguage. At times your volume goes so low it can't be heard, and while you put some effort, your intonation is overall plane (so you sound boring). You also need to improve fluency. I assume English isn't your mother-tongue so I won't touch that.

—Background music is annoying and makes it difficult to hear you talk.

—Annoying edition of the pictures. Don't need to stretch, rotate, etc. them while they're shown, that actually makes it more difficult to process them.

That's pretty much all I can think of right now.
 
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Cruxroux

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#25
Charlotte Horchata said:
Annoying edition of the pictures. Don't need to stretch, rotate, etc. them while they're shown, that actually makes it more difficult to process them.
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Good transition would do the job.
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ShishioIsBack said:
Well I wanna become big enough to make money off of it tho.
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Try to be consistent , YouTube isn't the type of platform if you upload once a month/two months and expect algorithm to make any of your video viral out of blue.

YouTube rewards Consistency the most.
 
ShishioIsBack

ShishioIsBack

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#26
#26
Charlotte Horchata said:
I'm not commenting on the video.

Some quick feedback:

—You need better quality of both video and audio. Right now it is unbearable to follow.

—You're clearly overacting since you aren't comfortable with recording. It's okay, most amateurs make this mistake: too much body movement (can't keep your own position regarding the camera), unnatural kinesics, etc. Don't overdo it and your true personality will flow naturally once you take more practice.

—Poor usage of paralanguage. At times your volume goes so low it can't be heard, and while you put some effort, your intonation is overall plane (so you sound boring). You also need to improve fluency. I assume English isn't your mother-tongue so I won't touch that.

—Background music is annoying and makes it difficult to hear you talk.

—Annoying edition of the pictures. Don't need to stretch, rotate, etc. them while they're shown, that actually makes it more difficult to process them.

That's pretty much all I can think of right now.
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Wasn't necessarily overacting, but I did make this video with purpose of comedy.

The rest I will definitely incorporate, next time I make a video.
Hopefully I can get my hands on better equipment.

This was more like an experiment. I came back from the club and recorded over my phone at 1 am.
Then just spending rest of the night downloading video editor, pictures, gifs, creating channel, actually editing and uploading the video.

Very new to video editing, I mean literally very first time I have done it.
 
ShishioIsBack

ShishioIsBack

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#30
#30
Btw I was being pretty sarcastic with all the Oda ass kissing towards the end lmao
@comrade
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DarkestKnightofSpoilers said:
Gave it a like and Sub ,takes courage to even start a channel and putting your face out there :cheers:


maybe work a bit at the lightning because it‘s a bit overlighted ,and some audio tweaks in your next one and you are good to go.
anything else setup and quality comes with time .
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The Sub is very much appreciated my dude
:cheers:

Will work based on that feedback :)
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Who is WorstGenHq btw?

Who ever you are, shout to you.
Appreciate this comment
:sweat:
 
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Welkin

Welkin

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#32
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ShishioIsBack said:
OP style background like?
You mean my channel banner?

Or like behind me in the video?

Also yeah I will do better editing next time.

Literally I discussed making YouTube channel on discord last morning and did it in the night.
My very first time ever video editing.

But most importantly is video entertaining or nah?
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Thank you my brudda
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Both if you want your channel to be OP themed

It’s entertaining but it would be even better with great editing to go along with the memes

It’s not really something you can control though. Editing is something you’ll grasp over time
 
Blackbeard

Blackbeard

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#34
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ShishioIsBack said:
Guys this might seem like shameless plug in but I have been in this community a while and I thought I'd share with you guys

I decided to make a YouTube Video, and would love it if Ya'll gave it a watch


If I did a decent job, maybe give me a like and subscribe.

Shit on me in the comments otherwise lol

Going back to acedemia for grad school, would be nice if channel works out

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Good, more like perfect start. Keep up.

Sentinel said:
Good video, especially since it's your 1st video. Can't wait to see you in one of KoL's podcasts!
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A KoL/Shishio podcast would be a dream come true.
 
ShishioIsBack

ShishioIsBack

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#35
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Sentinel said:
Good video, especially since it's your 1st video. Can't wait to see you in one of KoL's podcasts!
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Blackbeard said:
Good, more like perfect start. Keep up.



A KoL/Shishio podcast would be a dream come true.
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I will probably get banned from youtube for being fatphobic by the time that podcast is done tho.
:funky::gokulaugh::suresure::suresure:
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Welkin said:
Both if you want your channel to be OP themed

It’s entertaining but it would be even better with great editing to go along with the memes
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Yeah I will work on that.
Like I said, first time editing a video in my life.

I will need to invest more time into it.

It also depends on how much time I can save from my study, HW, social life, part time jobs etc.
Gonna have to say no to dating for a while it looks like.
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Blackbeard said:
Good, more like perfect start. Keep up.
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Thanks bro....I am glad I didn't shit the bed lmao
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