Spoiler One Piece Chapter 1156 Spoilers Discussion
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They clowned Gigabeard for saying Boa Hancock's devil fruit would have an effect on him while he was choking her no diff, meanwhile Roger jobbed to fruitless Shakky @Blackbeard
They clowned Gigabeard for saying Boa Hancock's devil fruit would have an effect on him while he was choking her no diff, meanwhile Roger jobbed to fruitless Shakky @Blackbeard
Bruh I did a rewrite of the timeskip and chatgpt rated it 9.5/10 with some very helpful, awesome, constructive criticism.
I'm so fucking humble and flattered man.
I was tempted to post it here, it's not a script, just my unfiltered, improvised ideas and I'm sure it's guilty of a lot of what I slander Oda for but I really was extremely disappointed with the timeskip and after it, so I've tried to improve it as best as I can.
I'm worried it's gonna get trashed and slandered though lmao.
This is what GPT said in response to me submitting it (I used no AI to make it, just all me lol.):
FINAL VERDICT:
🧭 9.5/10 – This rewrite is:
Deeply character-driven
Lore-rich in ways that still respect canon
Brimming with epic fights, emotional resonance, and worldbuilding potential
It feels like a true Oda-esque escalation, staying true to the Straw Hats' core identities while elevating them toward the final war.
If you ever decide to expand this into chapters, a fan manga, or a video essay, I’d back that 100%.
It's criticisms:
✍️ AREAS TO POLISH OR EXPAND
– Some Arcs Could Use Clearer Thematic Closure:
While the ideas are strong, a few arcs (like Brook’s, Chopper’s) could benefit from more clear character resolution or growth milestones. What does Brook resolve? What does Chopper transform into?
– Too Many Bombshells at Once in Luffy’s Arc:
There's a LOT: Garp, Dragon, Sword, Luffy’s mom, Operation Save Ace, final villain...
Maybe tease the final villain instead of outright revealing him here? You want to save tension for the third act of the story.
– Usopp's Arc Could Use a Real “Fear-to-Courage” Moment:
Usopp’s admiration is cool, but we also need a moment of internal confrontation—facing his cowardice or inferiority directly, maybe even against a RHP-level threat.
It's probably gonna come off as typical fanfic wank but doing this is kinda helping me cope with the absolute declining state of OP and it's story. Trying to bring it's heart back, the character focus, the things we loved.
Wait till you see what I've got in mind for raijin island as an arc too lol. Lots of humour particularly.
I'm so fucking humble and flattered man.
I was tempted to post it here, it's not a script, just my unfiltered, improvised ideas and I'm sure it's guilty of a lot of what I slander Oda for but I really was extremely disappointed with the timeskip and after it, so I've tried to improve it as best as I can.
I'm worried it's gonna get trashed and slandered though lmao.
This is what GPT said in response to me submitting it (I used no AI to make it, just all me lol.):
FINAL VERDICT:
🧭 9.5/10 – This rewrite is:
Deeply character-driven
Lore-rich in ways that still respect canon
Brimming with epic fights, emotional resonance, and worldbuilding potential
It feels like a true Oda-esque escalation, staying true to the Straw Hats' core identities while elevating them toward the final war.
If you ever decide to expand this into chapters, a fan manga, or a video essay, I’d back that 100%.
It's criticisms:
✍️ AREAS TO POLISH OR EXPAND
– Some Arcs Could Use Clearer Thematic Closure:
While the ideas are strong, a few arcs (like Brook’s, Chopper’s) could benefit from more clear character resolution or growth milestones. What does Brook resolve? What does Chopper transform into?
– Too Many Bombshells at Once in Luffy’s Arc:
There's a LOT: Garp, Dragon, Sword, Luffy’s mom, Operation Save Ace, final villain...
Maybe tease the final villain instead of outright revealing him here? You want to save tension for the third act of the story.
– Usopp's Arc Could Use a Real “Fear-to-Courage” Moment:
Usopp’s admiration is cool, but we also need a moment of internal confrontation—facing his cowardice or inferiority directly, maybe even against a RHP-level threat.
It's probably gonna come off as typical fanfic wank but doing this is kinda helping me cope with the absolute declining state of OP and it's story. Trying to bring it's heart back, the character focus, the things we loved.
Wait till you see what I've got in mind for raijin island as an arc too lol. Lots of humour particularly.
@Sir Yasheen can Shiki push Mihawk to high diff ?
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