General & Others Create your own OP-Character

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#1
Hey Guys!


Its obvious what this thread is about. I would like to see how creative you all are, I want read new ideas, storys, adventures, legendarys and over all, that’s why we are in this thread, new characters!

I don’t want to give you much rules for that, I mean we are in One Piece, which rules can we set here anyway? The only one would be, the character should be placed in the OP-World and should fit in, more or less.

And for example, I already did one in another forum, which I present for start. For sure its open for discussion and not only posting ideas, so… feel free, show me ideas, discuss about the ideas and just have fun!


So the first one:


Name: Charlotte Komo

Age: 48

Sex: Male

Height: 5.11m

From: Whole Cake Island

Birthday: 25.11

Haki specialisation: Busoshoku

Fruit: Ryu Ryu no Mi - Type: Varanus komodoensis


Story:
Komo is the twin-brother of Charlotte Katakuri and was guessed dead. As twin-brother to Katakuri he was allways in competition with his brother, allways fighting for being stronger, faster, eaten more and more. But it seemed that he never achived a win against Katakuri, which was everytime a bit ahead, so did Katakuri won a race with 2 seconds between, won a fighting competition with winning against 2 more soldiers, won a quiz-Duell with 2 more correct answers...

So one day, Komo called it the final challenge, he wanted to beat Katakuri, no matter what. So he choosed a duell in eating, knowing Katakuri hates sweet food, he choosed a bakery-Island for the duell. While preparations for the duell, Katakuri on a near by Island gets to know that some of his Family members tricked every challenge, so katakuri would win against Komo, Mama told them, because Komo grows strongest in competition, he needs to lose to gets more strenght. Katakuri learns he would have lost every challenge, closely, but lost. In hurry to tell Komo, his Twin-Brother, the one he loves and trusts most, he is on his way to the Bakery Island. He gets stopped by some Cooks and Ministers from Bakery Island, telling him he cant go the Island right now, because Big Mum ordered a huge amount of Donuts, which they prepared, and Big mum is already on her way to the Island, in Hunger Rage and aiming for the Donuts.

At this time Komo was already eating a big amount of Donuts, to make sure he would beat Katakuri this time. Strictly counting the Donuts he was eating, alongside with the time when exactly he eats them, Komo is pretty sure about his win, because he didnt even heard Katakuri eating by now. But then he was Hearing Big mum, in Rage of her Hunger arriving at the Bakery Island, searching for her Donuts. But all she finds is Komo together with some leftovers from the Donuts. In Rage she is grabbing at Komo, some Cooks are watching, and she seems to eat him completely, while Komo is crying and screaming.
All was left here was a few Information about when he ate the Donuts. These times will mark the future Snack Times of Katakuri and the following day was the first day Katakuri ever loved to eat a Donut.

Presence:
While Big Mum and the most of the BMP are on Wano, someone attacks Whole Cake Island. It seemes to be Pirates, which were part of Kaidos Crew at some time, but the flag is destroyed and only a few parts are left. The Crew at whole attack Whole Cake Island. Defeating some Ministers and some attacking citizens, not killing them, Katakuri appears at the Island of attack and treat them to stop, otherwise he will kill them all in one blow.
After these words, some big Man, more or less the same height as Katakuri, appears at the front of the ship, laughing and answering:
"You wont beat me this time Katakuri. But i dont want to fight you like this, i will kill Mama, after that, we can go back to our challenge!"

It is revealed that Komo survived the attack, because he managed the Change the place with some chocolate-Donut and got himself the first time in his life covered by Busoshoku Haki. He got thrown very fast away, luckily landing on some stranger ship, which was there for some trading. The Traders decided to sell this kid to Kaido, because they saw him with the Busoshoku Haki, which would make a huge amount of Money. Like planed, they did and he grew up as one of Kaidos underlings, never telling someone who he is originaly, even Kaido knew where Komo is comming from, he never cared and never talked about that. While Komo got stronger, got his Devil Fruit, he managed to get part of the flying six and later was told to be the next Desaster. So, after Jack got beaten by Zuo, he was declared as next Desaster, but refused. He told King that he will kill Big Mum to fuse the two Crews to become the leader of Whole Cake Island, together with Katakuri, all under Kaidos flag. King told him he likes the idea, but Kaido wouldnt, so if he want to start this fight, he needs to do this on his own, not under Kaidos flag. If he wins, they can arrange everything else.

Now, Komo in front of Katakuri, he tells his Story. Katakuri is hugely confused, kind of sad, kind of mad, kind of happy. But he tells Komo that he cant allow him to attack Mama, he needs to defend her, until his last breath. He also tells him that Mama left for Wano. Komo reacts obviously sad, crys in tears, feels betrayed bis his Twin-Brother, but then attacks Katakuri.

"I am sorry Kata, but when you cant help me, i will need to beat you and wait for Mama, to kill her. I know we can work through this together after Mama is dead!".

So the fight beginns and Komo manage to beat Katakuri in faith of getting his first win against Katakuri. Proud of himself, he prepares for Mamas homecoming, gets his wounds healed and Katakuri imprisoned. In the time of waiting, they talk alot at the prison, they even Play some games, just like as when they were children. But Katakuri is not able to open the thruth to Komo, the thruth about his wins in the past.

After some time it appears Mama is coming back from Wano, her ships arrives at the coast, together with a smaller one. But on the Ship lies down Mama, very hurtened and in some kind of koma. On her side some weird reindeer, trying to help her condition. Komo, not sure if he should be happy about that, accept the condition and is going to kill big mum, but get stopped by luffy, which tells him that she already got defeated by helping him, so he is in Charge to help her, bring her back to her Family and Island. He wont allow Komo to kill Big Mum!

The fight beginns!
 
#3
Depending on my mood, I have different characters in mind. Presently, it is a powerful swordsman (EOS material, obviously, but I would start as a rookie).

No Devil Fruit, but all physical stats and Haki maxed out.

Observation Haki:
Future Sight, Island wide observation and reflexes that allow me to detect invaders in sleep, allowing me to wake up in response.

Armament Haki:
Highest level possible, able to cut down everyone and everything. Kaido's a joke to me.

King's Haki:
Everything we saw so far; knocking people out and do damage to the surroundings.
Also able to do physical damage to the opponent, like here:
Works the better, the weaker the opponents will/King's Haki is and vice versa.

This is my Katana:

That Katana is a black blade, obviously, and is one of the 12 supreme grade blades. It has a length standard to Katanas, not a long Odachi. Sharp, swift and graceful.

Character itself is extremely fast. Can use Geppou, learned it for the case as it's a useful technique.
Even without his sword, he is extremely powerful. For the case of not having access to his sword, he is channeling his extremely powerful armament through his palms to deliver powerful blows to someones body and organs. Akin to what Hyogoro did, but magnitudes above. Above what Rayleigh or Shanks could do with their Haki. But of course I would never let go of my sword. Hence an observation Haki that would allow me to detect invaders in sleep. Because ain't nobody will lay a hand on my sword to have me chase him like Zoro.

As for power levels, he would extrem diff EOS Luffy. High diffing Primebeard/Roger and mid diffing Kaido. Depending on where Imu stands though, there is room for improvement.

I know, sounds super overpowered, but keep in mind that this was achieved through tremendous training, fights that pushed him to his limits and put him on the verge of death multiple times. I do not request this character to participate in any RPG, it is my personal fantasy.

:cheers:

As for my goals and life. After not finding any strong opponents any more, I just spend my time as a traveler and bounty hunter. Seeing the world and reading. Occasionally, I come across islands that are occupied by pirates terrorizing the peaceful folk. Helping them to find piece by cutting down the enemies and allowing that folk to receive the bounties for the pirates that occupied their home town.
 

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Lazy is the way
#4
This is my first one, I have another in mind (I will repost it here)

He is a "enemy" (for some time) of WB and his crew (especially Marco), but he is not a real bad guy.

WB is the best father of the sea but what if it was not exactly true. WB had a lot of "sons" and a big family and he cared about them very much.
But WB has maybe a true son.

WB has been a pirate for a long time, and times to times he went on differents islands to visist etc. When WB was younger (more or less 40~) during one of his visit in a poor city he slept with a woman he met in a bar. They spent some time together but he left to sail again. But the woman got pregnant (WB didn't know that) and had a son.

She told his son that he was the son of the great WB and he left because he was a pirate that cannot have a real family due to his live style, that he cannot settle in one place. They lived in poverty and with rough conditions but the son was pretty proud to be WB son because he was a great pirate and his mom told him great stories about him.

When he had 15 his mother died and he decided to go at sea to be like his father and to be in his crew.

What was not his surprise to discover that WB had a family, a lot of sons that he loves and take cares of. And he became a little bit angry that WB had time to built a real family with his crew but he left his mother and him behind with nothing. He swore to have revenge.

I can imagine that Marco will be his greatest enemy because he is the "1st" son of WB, the strongest etc and the son that our character is the most jealous of.

I see him spending some times in WB crew without telling him about his true parentage. During that time he made bounds and friends with lower members but he grew more and more angry with WB and his closest commanders (especially Marco). After 2 years in WB ships, one day he snapped at Marco and in front of everyone confronted WB about his hypocrisy, and his mother etc. At first no one believed him but the more he spoke the more WB begin to believe him, and his haki told him that he told the truth.

He left WB's crew telling him to fuck off. WB tried to stop him, but he and everyone was in shock.

He then made is own way, had his own adventures and creat his own crew. He obviously crossed path with WB pirates during his adventures, and each times it was electric. (a big ass fight with Marco)

Down the line, as he grew up maybe his resentment against WB will diminish but it will take time.
 
#14
My character that I made for the OP RP on OJ was always one I wish I had finished:



A Killer Whale Marine Fishman who joined an underground society of Martial Artists who fought for True Justice in his younger years, and ended up joining the Marines with the goal of destroying Raftel lol. He even had his own ship:

Lee was the best damn thing in the entire RP. :catsweat:

When he went, a good chunk of my motivation for RP was gone. :catcry:
 
#16
My first One Piece character would be named Kobo.

Kobo is a bounty hunter and mercenary who accept every kind of missions, even ridiculous ones, as long as they give him the thrill of the hunt and the occasion to kill at lot of people.

Kobo is immoral, sarcastic, cynical about the world, ultra-violent (he can smash a person's skull just because the person insulted his favorite food or annoyed him with his snore), cunning and very very talkative with a very dark sense of humor. He's also extremely tenacious and stuborn, when he has decided to capture someone he never stops hunting him/her/them until capture or death and if he fails he will just come back stronger and with a better plan as the Straw Hats found out the hard way. He's also a pragmatic and brutal fighter who never hesitate to use brutality such as breaking his opponents' limbs or spine or killing them and to attack them without having been detected or when they are in a position of weakness. He however has a sense of honor as he always keep his word and can show respect to a prey that gave him a true challenge.

Kobo has no devil fruit but he was born with a gift like Kaido, Big Mom or Kelly Funk though in his case his gift is the ability to regenerate from nearly any wound very quickly.

He has also gotten though years of training and hunting a superhuman strength much superior to the Monster Trio's one (he is able of overpowering G3 Luffy's attacks, DJ kicks and Zoro's gorilla arms attacks with his strength and has broken Luffy and Zoro's arm by twisting them or clutching them hard enough with his hand), he's also very fast and agile and he also knows Geppo and Soru moves. His great durability combined to his regeneration ability makes him extremely hard to knock out or kill if you're not a Top Tier, he can endures G4 attacks, Ashura, Gamma Knife and still be very able of fighting after. Being used to receive on a daily basis injuries that would kill others Kobo has an extreme tolerance for pain and even against a serious foe he never shut up during battles and is very good at infuriating his foes with his sense of repartee and humor.

Kobo is very versatile weapon user and he's very good at using all kind of weapons such as swords, staffs, arrows laced with paralysing poison, firearms, explosives , bolas, boomerang, chain, etc...

He also uses Coo (though mainly to locate and track his targets) and advanced Coa though mainly for attack since his healing factor means that he rarely needs to protect himself from ennemies' attacks.
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Now that I think of it I will rather call him Koltar.
 
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#17
My first One Piece character would be named Kobo.

Kobo is a bounty hunter and mercenary who accept every kind of missions, even ridiculous ones, as long as they give him the thrill of the hunt and the occasion to kill at lot of people.

Kobo is immoral, sarcastic, cynical about the world, ultra-violent (he can smash a person's skull just because the person insulted his favorite food or annoyed him with his snore), cunning and very very talkative with a very dark sense of humor. He's also extremely tenacious and stuborn, when he has decided to capture someone he never stops hunting him/her/them until capture or death and if he fails he will just come back stronger and with a better plan as the Straw Hats found out the hard way. He's also a pragmatic and brutal fighter who never hesitate to use brutality such as breaking his opponents' limbs or spine or killing them and to attack them without having been detected or when they are in a position of weakness. He however has a sense of honor as he always keep his word and can show respect to a prey that gave him a true challenge.

Kobo has no devil fruit but he was born with a gift like Kaido, Big Mom or Kelly Funk though in his case his gift is the ability to regenerate from nearly any wound very quickly.

He has also gotten though years of training and hunting a superhuman strength much superior to the Monster Trio's one (he is able of overpowering G3 Luffy's attacks, DJ kicks and Zoro's gorilla arms attacks with his strength and has broken Luffy and Zoro's arm by twisting them or clutching them hard enough with his hand), he's also very fast and agile and he also knows Geppo and Soru moves. His great durability combined to his regeneration ability makes him extremely hard to knock out or kill if you're not a Top Tier, he can endures G4 attacks, Ashura, Gamma Knife and still be very able of fighting after. Being used to receive on a daily basis injuries that would kill others Kobo has an extreme tolerance for pain and even against a serious foe he never shut up during battles and is very good at infuriating his foes with his sense of repartee and humor.

Kobo is very versatile weapon user and he's very good at using all kind of weapons such as swords, staffs, arrows laced with paralysing poison, firearms, explosives , bolas, boomerang, chain, etc...

He also uses Coo (though mainly to locate and track his targets) and advanced Coa though mainly for attack since his healing factor means that he rarely needs to protect himself from ennemies' attacks.
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Now that I think of it I will rather call him Koltar.
Kobo reminds me of Zoro for some reason :cheers:
 
#18
Mine would be a dude called Larry Lemon.

Larry was a completely ordinary pirate with pretty standard combat experience. A solid pirate in the first half of the Grandline, nothing more.

Then one day he ate the Luck-Luck-Fruit. Now all he does is having luck in every facet of life. Even in the most horrible looking situations he somehow comes out on top due to the weirdest plot-armor caused by his inevitable and unbelievable luck.
 
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