You will carry on the will of mother. I will impart to you my memories. There are plenty who would love to be where you are. With this karma you will be a progenitor of my mother. Which would be your great grandmother, Kayuga Otsutsuki. I am your father. When the time comes you will be my vessel. I plan to finally reach godhood. And through you I will see this godhood.
Come my child..
No nein ne.
I'll give you a 3/10 on RPing.
1- No setting. If you want to RP to strike fear and give the feel of impending doom you must first set the environment and explain the surroundings. Like in LNs people need to know the atmosphere in which the event is ocurring.
2- Too much one liners/posts. If you spread them throughtout time, people will forget the first posts. Do it in one big WU.
3 - You're too vague. Naturally you're not going to say what's happening but you must at least showthe end result of the action by RPing."Take chakra" by itself is nothing to fear, mages in Manhwa get their mana depleted and they're fine after a rest. You must say they die or smth and must paint it in an excruciating way. Like it it now there is no feel of impending disaster.
Case in point - Krul Tepes's WU with the Night of the Blood Moon ability. 1, 2, and 3 are checked.