I'd probably reccomend rereading it then man. Point was before pointing the finger at the electoral college for being corrupt or outdated, which it's not for what the USA is as a country (bunch of states connected by a federal government), there are much bigger issues, which would only be exploited more in the popularity election. Parties were mentioned because of buying off votes with influence or money, no system can fix that for you in a free-elect nation.
Though if we had a King or Queen, then I'd be 100% with you on getting rid of the electoral. But getting rid of it when the nation is already grasped by 2 parties? Yeaa, I'll pass.
And the 2-party system isn't really a model. It's the result of Americans choosing allegiance to these two parties when other options are available. It's a direct creation of the american people, by either a result of manipulation or ignorance or mix of both.
Ps: dont meant to sound rude or serious here bro (in case I'm coming off that way).